MONSTAR POT1ENT AND A2Z


what if the power were mine-
to allign-every rapper and have them sign-
to battle each other to divide who real and who mime?
who would i use?i mean who would i choose?
to set it off like a big bomb with a short fuse?
who the illest win or loose- could leave you confused-
so this battle is so the fans can be amused.
(to begin)
i think i'd like the rematch of ESOTERIC and JINN.
the DEMIGOD versus the RIDE OR DIE how would it end?
i mean who could win punchline for punchline over the mic?
as the esoterridactol takes flight
with some word type that kept the crowd hype.
but JIN had twisted some GIN .. spit 80 out the mouth-
aboute the asian invasion and how ESO was a weak 106 drop out.
ESO gets pist and starts to ball his fist-
but whats the point when every diss will miss?
amidst all this,he got CELPH and APATHY into the fight-
so JIN pulls some JET LI and tags in CAGE,JAKKI, and COPYWRITE.
3 on 3 the D.G.z verses the E.C..... im frozen in suspence-
as COPY attacks APATHY the situation gets intence.
COPY turns a metaphor to a metal bar-
swings a punchline and leaves APATHY scarred.
AP does what he does best, to leave OH10'S greatest to rest-
left him staggered and shook with an ill track and hook.
at the same time CAGE burns ESO with a milokoff-
while CELPH turns JAKKI DA MOTA MOUTHS engine off.
1-1 so on the shoulder it resides.
so COPY felt APATHETIC and killed him in a verbal homicide.
now as all this happens the next battle was set aside-
as we just herd NAS pulled the trigga on JIGGA in a drive bye.
The king- fallen to the emperor of queens-
Where is the answer?

NAS: I knew son couldn’t fade me so I just finished faster.

Rest in peace J-HOVA its ova lifes a bitch and deaths a bastard.
Next up we got a battle nastier the LIL KIM-
We got KRS versus the mighty RAKIM.
Now we aint herd from him since he left DRE and SLIM-
While KRS saw the light but his careers looks dim.
Fuck the accusations of a ghostwriter-now we prove who’s tighter.
Who is biter and who battles like street fighters.
Now when they both hit the stage the room set on fire.
As KRS saya he is hip hop and RA calls him a liar-

RAKIM: you aint real plus your careers diseased-
Havnt spit a tight rhyme since THE SOUND OF THE POLICE.
BDP is dead plus you aint the martyr-
so fuck you and Kenny parker.
I here you now and just laugh-
plus in my opinion NELLY would rip your ass.

KRS: you don’t toat heaters-
Im the greatest you just FALLOW THE LEADER.
You cant go commercial you not ready for cable…
How you THE MASTER the AFTERMATH is you got no LABEL.
You a siiner plus you going to hell-
The only reason DRE signed you is cause your good for being shelved.
No offence-but come kid you got outshined by 50 CENTZ.

Yo KRS your disqualified that shot was below the belt-
A lil to personal but don’t worry atleast it was felt.
Another classic in the books yo the last was a hot peace-
Next battle we got M-1 from DEAD PREZ against KILLAH PRIEST.
2 scholars not concearned with being ballers-
Nor interested witth being white collared.
Face off as M-1 shows black proof and slave pictures-
But KILLAH is already conscious and attacks with bible scriptures.

DEAD PREZ: you fucked pa-you only worship their white god…..
KILLAH PRIEST: and the alve days over your ignorant and don’t realize god is allah and yemenyha.

Damn M-1 her got you and you cant debate it-
You shouldn’t go up against the religious icon without being life educated.
We short on time boys there only room for 1 left-
So next we got TALIB KWELI against the mighty MOS DEF.
Black star at war?
MOS got a gift but as of late he aint been to great-
While KWELI is late- WAITING FOR THE DJ so he can leave MOS ate.

MOS: Yo I'm tryin to make a dollar out of what makes sense
KWELI no offence but yours still aint made cents.

KWELI :yo pardon but you fell off don’t rep where you reside-
From david bowie to tight clothes I wonder if you rstill BLACK ON BOTH SIDES.

Oooh that’s ruff-MOS screams that’s enough.
You aitn got to bring how your brought it that shit was rough.
Some of the greates m.c. stepping inside of the ring-
With me as the promoter feeling like DON KING.
Now this just a few battles I wonder with battles like this-
And the underground blowing up who I will put on the remix.

different...well done!!! those would be some tight match-ups..you did a good job portraying each one lke it really happened

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let's get this shit straight, i'm here to eliminate- them squadz wit feminine traits, there's no escape!

^ yea that was a real diffrent piece...that would be a dope cypher/battle too....I didn't know a few of the emcees that u had but most of em I'm familar with n think u did a decent job of replicating....but other than that I can't really crit your skills since u was basically writing for someone else...pretty tite shit tho bro

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thank you whtwould you change though

UPPIN PLEASE READ THIS

This Was Dope.. Always A Good Read
From You Word.. Ya Flow Is Serious Genious..
I Love It.. Nice Drop Dukes

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Your replies. Thanks.

i did the three names are the three i responded to

liked the cocept behind this, yet again you produced an ill fucking drop, when i seen the length it sorta put me off, but once i started reading, it kept me reading, good vocab, good structure, ryhming.. allround....aight....... pc

UPPIN AND THANK YOU

This was a tight piece. .I mean everything was dope, I didn't see any multis, you could them in, in my opinion to make it better but people seem too think its dope enough. .so. .

Everything was dope & I understood apart from why my name was at the top. .huh??

Also get at me on YIM for collab bud

your shit is fucken awesome man