imma bust tha cuffs off these wirsts, ready for this...?

no way will i lose, always will i choose/
never 10 o'clock news, always rappin blues/
but that's a-bout to change...
derange a man wit insane brains...
simple, naw, i'm for real, i ain't tryin/
but one thing for sure, i'll still produce hits while i'm dyin/
never quit...
this is where i belong, is it wrong?/
so many deathwishes u hear in my songs/
is that really wat i'm thinking? bringin pain like lil boys singin/
lil boys rappin, not even ready for tha world/
Em's rappin bout his lil-one, n they still tha lil-girl/
i really don't understand, i had a plan/
it was so messed up, how can i be a man/
if u don't give me a chance to move to a better land/
i do wat i can, but i will not be able to save myself if i'm banned/
no way wit know how, cause peeps don't know how/
if they wanted to survive tha knives, thier lives need to slow down/
but mine is still in tha fast lane, i got a fast brain/
to destroy tha boy wit a last name tha same as mine/
that's tha main idea of my brain, my mind/
this time, i will not be put down for tha crime/
i've down my time, i'm through wit it/
i'll break ur arm in two for not usin it/
it just sits in place...on ur waist...wat a waste/
keep tha pace...a pace that stays...for two days/
and before today, u were thinkin u was tha greatest in too many wayz...

but now wat?

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faster pace more anger fell a lil bit on content but still a dope read i like it stay up

Read the rules.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87961

Thank you...

here:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90244

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90346

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90287

happy?

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^ damn see these assholes deleted my songs...all they do to u is warn you....arghhh lol

pretty good piece for a keystyle...depending on what you consider to be a key (to me a keystyle is something that I just write continuously with very little pauses and then come back to edit a few words to fix the flow..others call just about anything that takes under 30 mins a key...)

fast paced kinda shit...started off dope...actually the intro thing was my favorite part of the entire thing lol....u started off lookin good and then started gettin weaker toward the middle but picked it up at the end...

overall solid keystyle....if u spent more than 10 or 15 minutes on this then I'd say it's pretty dissapointing....but for a quickkey it's not bad at all..

peace

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Yeah hoping this was a quickie..for a quickie not bad..you just lost a little steam towards the end..not bad not bad..peace