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Old 11-08-03, 11:10 AM   #1
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The Rough Draft Of This Track

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first one.
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Old 11-08-03, 11:15 AM   #2
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listened to this awhile ago..
..and turned it off because of the beginning.

nah - flow was good, beat is nice .. bumpable ..

now, hop off my avvy.
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Old 11-09-03, 02:32 AM   #3
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Ehhh..I'm not really feelin It Jae..The Hook more so..you're flow is tops on the verse..If You worked on it a bit more you know you could make it dope as hell...One We Is Fucken Dope As Hell hahaha...Jeah! You know what you can do..Pz..
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Old 11-09-03, 04:14 AM   #4
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understood about 3 words....

and the chorus..

the rest sounded liek you was TRYING to spit on a fast tip...but just couldnt...

dunno

see how the final version comes out i guess
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^ I am going to start calling you Negative Nancy.
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Old 11-09-03, 02:25 PM   #6
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^did you understand more than maybe 5 words?

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Old 11-09-03, 06:32 PM   #7
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Well i wasn't really feelin this track but it was OK. I think you got great mic presence and yer flow is on point, lyrics was just OK (i think it's how you were spittin but nothing stood out to me). i just wasn't feelin yer style 2 much but that's a preference of 1 mc to another. Your sound quality was good, a few jumbled words but this isn't studio shit like you said. Overall this was a decent drop.

I see you were voted most likely to make it outside of the net...mmmmmmm...beg to differ...we should audio battle sometime soon...stay up!!! 1
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