ite rulez=

8 lines max,
no d/r hate crew votes,
both spit in ten mins.
dats it...............pz

ite checkin in................................................ .................................................. ........................................pz

this guy has absoloutley no style-he'll be lucky if he could make a retard smile.
he sounds like he has been on crack-cos all his rhymes are whack.
y'all try critisicng the champ-but thats cos y'all like a bit of camp.
if u wanna real challenge cum to my gaff ill match you line 4 line can u handle abit of charlie brown? pronbably not cos u aint down to ride wit nigga's that show priks the real way 2 fight.
i will lose this battle cos contenders av got it in 4 da champ but who's complaining'
im gonna carry on reigning

listen you newbie ill spit on *you*, do da same thing as obie and mother fuckin shit on *you*,
hell yeh i got a loss or *two*, but ive never been merked, and thats wat ima *do*,

cus i got skills typed or spittin, im a fuckin rap *user*,
dey call you herb, cus your a rapbattles looser forward slash *abuser*,

listen man ive seen your battles and read ya other *verse*,
its quite clear that at the end of this battle youll be the *werst*,

your split like your mum, and da comdom your parents *burst*,
they said your mums a which, so i guess ur excuse was"im under her *curse*(for a shit verse)

ite hurry up n spit dat only tk me 5 mins..............................pz

ite my bad home didnt no u spit.............................................. ................votes na plz.............pz

yep oli got this
both verses want up 2 much but
punches,flow,sustainment n metas all went to
oli
vote=oli

MAKE SURE YA HIT UP MA BATTLE WITH DACURSE..IN MA SIG

oli got this fo sure---betta punches--------again champ didn't have any punches ya needa work on those atleast ya learned one thing though that's to take off the CAPS LOCK---lol

vote=oli

peep my battle with born it's fresh--return an honest vote

ok not much competition their the new b came too""""basic and anything oli put would have beaten that......oli came aight not his hardest but he still had enough to merk this kid

hey can drop here~~~~~> http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90329

Good merkin by Oli...

Clearly outclassed the new guy.

Better punches, format, flow, everything...

New guy...you started out ok, at least ya shit wasn't CAPPED.

But ya went off track with ya flow and rhyme scheme after the third line...

What happened?

Ya went for flow instead of format, that's what happened.

Alot of cats think a block ass paragraph will help flow, but it's been proven...

It doesn't.

Keep it up, you'll get better.

Peace

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THX yall uppin(1).................lol 4 up sweet............................................. ......................................pz

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YO I HIT THIS UP SO MAKE SURE YA'LL HIT UP THE BATTLE IN MA SIG AGAINST DACURSE.........................PA________________ __

cmon uppin(3).......................................... .................................................. ............................................pz