Freespit you get 8 lines max
you spit first since you called me out
knock yourself out g

I called you out bitch ta kill ya again/ This is like a movie where the bitch dies in the end/ You still tryin your hardest cause you wanna be black/ Your not, so live with it jus face the facts/ The only way you gonna be black is when I burn you bitch/ Turn you to ash and put you in a pen cap smaller than your dick/ You wanna step up the anty faggot toss your chips in/ Cause when I'm through with you, you never gonna wanna do this again

Your like a fuckin wild animal so i'm a TAG ya buddy/
cause when were lookin for a bitch ass mC then we'll know who to study/
you prostitute this game so much you make your momma look slutty/
and sold out and molded and such you ass like silly putty/
cause if i stick you to my rhymes you come off with a copy/
spit my rhymes back at me and you still can't stop me/
But fuck sticking you to my rhymes i'll just stick you in the face/
i'll like turpentine so your weak ass can't even try to deface/

alright plz votes on this now.....uppin for votes any votes
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uppin fo votes from all yall. At least come in and vote on it................................................ .......................................

come on vote on this and get it over wit............................................... .................................................. ...........

Hey yo someone frop a vote on this. It takes what liek a minute............................................ .................................................. .............

aight, can't really vote coz I need 100 posts and shit. TAG u win thiz battle. Verse112's rhymes were ok, tag's were juz a lil' bettah. Peace Out.

uppin fo the last time (4) Come on yo hit this up................................................ .................................................. ........

uppin fo some votes. Dun let this sleep. Vote and then leave a link so we can hit ya back.............................................. .................................................. ..

ite. both came evenly.
however there are some things that made tag win the verse.
verse had a terrible rhyme scheme and setup. horrible...
while tag had a way better flow...
vote tag

yo i got a new battle with damurderousone check it out with honest votes please...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=91956

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opening - tag
flow - tag
punches - tie
complexity - tag
structure - tag
enjoyment - tag
closing - tie
overall - if i could vote i would vote tag

return the favor and check out my battles below

thanks................

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You need ta up this some Verse, I can't do it no more.............................................. .................................................. ........................

opening - tag
flow - tag
punches - tie
complexity - tag
structure - tag
enjoyment - tag
closing - tie

Overall-Tag

both still need to elvate..