10 Lines
No Bullshit
No D/R all tht shit
blah blah blah
spit weneva...not to long
i gotta go to school pretty soon so ill spit when i get back in like 3hrs

spit when you want...wateva

C-heck

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origin, originated in misplaced masturbation
you a mistake, and now face obliteration
thinkin you ill like HIV?
i seen your shit, more liek HPV, genital wart i see
on that subject aids can't kill nobody take biology
thas why im ebola i swell up and bloody ya body
you can stop, your just a pawn
im a fuckin army that marches night til dawn
i could go and stamp your corpse 'to the lawn
but i alalready spit fire, ill let u burn til your gone

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<center>HemiSphere
The Write Side Of Your Mind</center>

.................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......................yo yo, line 7 is supposed to say you can't stop me you're just a pawn.............mistake.......................mak e sure u read this correction........................................ .................................................. ......................email or im me when u spit so i c it

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The Write Side Of Your Mind</center>

I aint on..period..that bloods yours its time to check ya wrist
Admitin ya aint pretty..so imma cum soft..i dont fuck a ugly bitch
Flyweight youz just plane sick askin for an email only way ya hit (his 2nd post)
Spreadin illness i rain spits..takin D out ya name..youz like Holy Shit!
Im eatin herbs..smokin..so jump in that bowl n ill rip the bong
My two I's aint seein wrong..ya lines mo played than cheech n chong (origin has 2 I's)
Imma delete ya ass..by spreadin my virus to ya avy
Straight off the shelf..youz outta date..like newb slavery (he signed up befo me)
I won this shit...fucka rhyme..sign ya loss..use the life line
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blah.....

*farts*

origin took this pretty easily---betta flow, punches, wordplay----personals too----sublime ya verse was aight but nuthin too good punch wise---vote=origin

hit up my battle with double0seven honetly thanxx

this was simple, origin won...
D, u really, REALLY gotta step it up a lil, use metaphors n personals...
origin, quit facin newbs n face someone like me...

oh, check mine against names, thank u...

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he wanted to battle me...i beat hit panik already..lol

wateva

thanks for the votes...il hit up them battles latter

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this was a very nice battle from both emcees now for da breakdown kna mean...

punch'srigin/my two i's ain't seeing wrong, ya punches are more played than cheech n chong lol.
opener:sublime
closerrigin
metha'srigin
creativityrigin
worth reading:tie
worth battling:both
overallrigin

i read both verses a few times ova and hands down origin took this kna mean shout out's to both of you niggas though both of y'all did da damn thing kna mean ~1~ holla

thanks^^^

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