ok,

10-20 lines

No-crew votes
No-Hate votes
No-d/r
No-feedin

All votes MUST be explained

checkin in..

ill spit after u check in..


Good Luck!!!

yo checkin in, spit ur shit, since its 11:25 have it done b4 12...pce out and good luck, we both tryin 2 elivate so no hard feelins........................................... .................................................. ...................

We all know u aint Jesus, cause we all kno Jesus would win
If u Jesus, then call me the devil cause im bout 2 commit a sin

Santa comes once a year 2 this kid, I come 2 him everynite(his nightmare) so I guess u can call me his hysteria (uncontrollable fear)
My lyrics are poison transmitted, nigga has only gotten 4 lines of it and he already thinks he’s caught malaria

Dawg chill, breath in and breath out, if u did then those r your last deep breath
Cause darkest knight just foreshowed your death

I must admit we both have the same record
But I’ll have u and ur lyrics retreat quicker than soldiers in the battle of concord (real war)

How can any1 take a nigga serious when they call themselves explicit
The way I strike at u, u wished god could heal it
If no1 has told ur darkest deepest secret then let me reveal it
U just got merked by 4 foot African midget

WHOOAA theres more
This pussy just got fucked a hundred times quicker than a whore

I guess I should stop and not pursuit (as in persuit on)
cause the only way u gonna win is if they stop me and put me in a mental institute

the last line means IM SO ILL THEY GOTTA PUT ME IN A MENTAL INSTITUTE SO HE CAN WIN............................................... .................................................. ....................................

yo on the jesus part, under explicit he put this..."im jesus...
my right hand writes diseases
my left hand will strike n fight ya weakness" so thats why i used my 1st 2 lines....ight im DONE NOW IM UPPIN FOR SOME VOTES....holla

no offense Dark but your verse was way off flow and there was nothing worth readin
choppy as fuck
i aint even gotta read x-s rhyme

and don't say i'm hatin just honest crit.

perfections ryhmes go into your stomach and damage your spine/exploding like volcanos spitting lava ryhmes/
standby for the Advancement of a Average MC/

A Lyrical Virus is Vandalizing causeing horror and tragedy/
watch out below cause im invadin ya facualty/
transform like voltron niggas cant come close to./
your weak text be vested in kleenex, i split em in two like im
rippin tissues/

eyo u lookin like a bitch too, why u in denile? when this description fits you/
you a wack ass nigga, i decided i aint havin it, and Explict has been rappin since/
why you posing nigga?? you come off more inanimate then da avrage mannequins/

your fake like faggit kids in college claiming that they practice abstinence/
im sick wit dis profession,so i jack your niche, cause extinctions of the wack inhabitants/
you fuckin pose like 2 year old sportin a turbin when u aint even heard of a persian/

I'm like a HIV, an airborne version, and i got dis bitch, its positive, cuz i even murder the virgins/
the fact is that he aint half the man, let alone a third of a person/
every time i spoke he packed and ran, as if my words coulda hurt em/

i leave yo DissedAble(disabled), so u can call me Kane, bitch ill have yo name all up on the hall of shame/
diagnosed by doctors, blamed as the cause of pain.
my bullets are like lil kids itchin to come out to play,but they grounded until a niggas 21st birthday.

yo dont sleep on this battle....UPPIIN.....HIT THIS SHIT UP....pce......................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....................

this was a good battle
i need to be able 2 vote so i can get into it more
for now help me close these threads ok
names vs verse112>2-0
names vs angellicalr>0-4
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hahah yo i kno y u call urself 1 liner, cause all u can do is come up with 1 line u pussy ass, but dont worry we all have our differ styles of rappin, and im guessin us is just headin south, IF UR 0-4 U SHOULDNT EVEN SAY SHIT TILL U COME UP WITH A CLOSE BATTLE.....how pathetic this wasnt a battle and i just kicked ur ass, next time becareful of wht u say....i dont need people sayin so and so won cause i sucked i need people tellin me wht i could have said or done 2 win, cause i just wanna elevate.....pce

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damn...explict took this easy yo.....he had better vocab and punches than Knight....knight had a much better structure and flow though....but Explict took this mostly because of better punches.....good read from u both....no hate...just a vote....

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peace
4:20

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explixt took this one. You both ahd some nice flows. darkest yours was a bit choppy at time. Hit this up and I'll battle yall lata. peace
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91471