Beauty's Only Skin Deep Camarac 6 19 11-14-03 02:21 PM
by Sublime D

My rhyme Da Chronic G 8 28 11-14-03 02:17 PM
by Sublime D

i donno Handcuffs 5 18 11-14-03 02:14 PM
by Sublime D

Affirmation of calculations and prophetic sayings
End times, the prophets come around laying
Knowledge to all who bother to acknowledge
A new lesson taught to adults like a new college
Ad majorem dei gloriam
Exhibiting the sin in the world, a historic emporium
Escaping the drudgery
We’re living lives of luxury
Dismissing prophecies as nothing, what happened to the mustard seed
In Somalia, families struggle with their mouths to feed
Our world has become ripe with abominations
We need a resolution, starting with our own nation
I got no problem with gay people and lesbians
But a homosexual Bishop, where will the madness end?
Pedophiles and sex offenders posing as clergymen
Rapin and mistreating our children, then like journeymen
Disappearing off the earth, with church protection
I don’t like the idea of a priest getting erections
Blatantly dishonoring God and the Resurrection
Sadly im a member of a fleeting section
Of the population with scruples and affection
For decency and ethics pleasing thee
Creator of our world, such people have vanished recently
I vehemently, proposition that the instant of such incidents be forbidden since they censor everything else anyway, so anyway, im anyway, how are you anyway, I been away, nothing to say, for many days, but after I prayed I came back to lay a main body of works that’ll hurt and diverge certain words of praise from other painstakingly brave aids to our cause, savin it all to release in a constant flow till I fall, I may make your mama ball, but I heard the call, so I have to draw, on my all
Ephemeral glimpses of genius
Are not in my genus
Ever since I was fetus, i felt a sensation, that i had a
Predestination to disabuse information
And sublimate man’s present mental state
Extricate straitlaced political magistrate
Sepulchral situation with vapid legislation
A new generation must affront the masses
Let aphoristic truths juxtapose future vision, exaggerated precision, my mission, for which I blazon my proclamation, im an agent for defenestration of ingratiating politicians who never have solutions, but are ripe with new crisis, predicament and quandaries….but im no anarchist, I just wish for an to an end to shit…when will the winds shift from bullshit to rift the riff from the voracious kids with the blessed instruction to remove societal obstructions...cause it's almost over its either now or nothin

aight let's get some feedback

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<center>HemiSphere
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I am on the same page with you man. The problems in all over the world are ignored and you letting it be known in a flow. Thats the hip hop i am talking about. Tellin it like it is but in your own unique style. You don't flow about hoes and guns and all that nonsense in the radio. You speak the true informative shit. tight flow man.

yo thanks for the love man..i wont lie though, i can spit on all types of stuff, its all about the mood

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<center>HemiSphere
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damn peopel keep sleepin on this ...uppin

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<center>HemiSphere
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uppin...

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<center>HemiSphere
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this is a good peice just long, you had a good flo it fell off at points but was good your vocab was pretty hot, you had good emotion and knowlage bout this idea of topic keep it up man

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

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<center>HemiSphere
The Write Side Of Your Mind</center>

the three links are supposed to be
threads u repplyed on
other than that
nice piece could work on somethings
and rhyme scheme especially
tooo complex for my stoner mind.

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We hang the petty thieves and appoint the great ones to public office
Aesop.