ite man 10 lines.
no d/r hate or crew votes.
both drop in 15 mins or before............................................ .......................gd luck ..........pz

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mista *raedar*, more like convicted rapist and a fucking kiddy *fealer*,
in this battle im the wellknown *leader*, so depressed after battleing he drank a bottle of *takeelar*,
your more hated than the forces and the *pigs*,
plus your as fake as Pamelas tits and bald people wearing *wigs*,
ive just exposed you more than girls on the porno *magazines*,
speaking of that, this should be x-rated for violence, cause im showing you what that *means*,
mista raedar to be honest your more like *masta bates*,
cause your wanking more than mr.kipling pumping cream into *cakes*,
so in the penoltemet bar^, i supose i just described you as a *toss*,
give a fuck man, wank on this another add to your *loss*.

bitch...........................pz

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91823

Hit this us while your waiting and ill vote later

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no freeposting .................................................. .........^........................................ .............................pz

The dogg patrol's here and im about to take oli dogg to the dogg pound/
You just a retired circus entertainer like krusty the clown.
Oli don't want it with me under water,because i'm known to blast sea shells/
i'm like a hotter form of fire,because I pack more heat than hell/
I'm like spider man,because I sense bad rappers/
i clap wack MC's so you can just call me the OLI clapper/
If you blew off my arms I still aint losin my touch/
you like a little kid,to win it aint taking much/
you like a plain noun,your name don't deserve a capitol letter/
I knew this kid was wack as soon as i met her/(her)

lets get these votes in..fire
good battle dog.....
noow its all up to the votes..
good luck playa

GLOKK STARZZ

Vote: Oli Dogg

Better verse in every categorie cept flow, had many more multies also

Wack battle, peace out


Please hit up my battle with Planet X if u appreciate this honest vote..........its in frontlines near the etop

Vote Oli...
He had better everything.....flow punches and shit......just drop those stars kid....

hit me up with a vote...i took the time....http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91981

WHY THE FUCK DO I KEEP LOSING AND WHY DO YALL GO FOR THOSE STUPID FORCES, AND PIG RHYMEZ ...FUCKIN HEYLL I SWEAR TOO GODD!

forget it

^da fuck man........?...................................... .................................................. ............pz

close battle. - mista had better flow and sum nice creativity. oli had better personals... but i felt sum of the lines fell flat.

vote would be mista if i could vote


best lines:

mista *raedar*, more like convicted rapist and a fucking kiddy *fealer

mista raedar to be honest your more like *masta bates

I knew this kid was wack as soon as i met her/(her)

Oli don't want it with me under water,because i'm known to blast sea shells

worst lines:
The dogg patrol's here and im about to take oli dogg to the dogg pound
^^too obvious

cause your wanking more than mr.kipling pumping cream into *cakes
^^^what?

Return the Favor on my Current Battles:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92244

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91441

OPener: DOGG
Closer: Raed
Punches: DOGG
Personals: DOGG
Flow: Raed
Winner: DOGG

Hit this battle up with a vote please! http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91314