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The life of ignorance
IP: 0BA5 FAF6
Replies to@ Deva, Envy-Skillz, etc..
The life of ignorance is not all fun// The life of ignorance is not with a gun// The strife of deliverance has just begun// The life of ignorance is not to run// A genius at making a direct point towards people// Un-believable extremeness when being discreet-full// Like a rat in the passageway I bite furiously// Like a bitch, been slapped you bleed horrendously// Serious thinking when up against a dick-wad// Deliriously sinking, when he gets lyrically hit hard// By a tactical flame thrower from an impeccable verse Enough to leave his metrical head burn up n burst// Like a curse of grief I haunt the un-wanted// Put punches beyond belief, n reverse your lines to ‘muted’// Like dejected rubbish, your ass gets booted// Like an elected president, you get prosecuted// The life of ignorance is not all fun// The life of ignorance is not with a gun// The strife of deliverance has just begun// The life of ignorance is not to run// Experienced fighter when it comes to the stage// I release my anger n frustration out in a rage// I cage my opponent to minimal strategies// Compose an element bringing him to his knees// Like a fresh breeze of carbon monoxide I kill quickly// Burn up the eyes n the insides of my opponent drastically// Lyrically talented when it comes to dramatic scenery// Like when 50 said to Jeffery “nigga you’d love to be me”// Exceptional word play that leads the mind stray// Like an Uzi with a microphone, I lyrically spray// Bruising your torso n bone, you’d be stupid to stay// Letting the world know… ‘Set-IgnoRance’ doesn’t play… The life of ignorance is not all fun// The life of ignorance is not with a gun// The strife of deliverance has just begun// The life of ignorance is not to run//
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IP: D2D1 B5AF
thats not too bad nigga
good vocab good imagery too rhyme scheme okay, you coulda did better i think chorus might need work overall not too bad, sorry it was slept on one ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ |
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