Truth hurts - Fgee Ft Rhythmic
Letter to her - ClaustrophobicS
When darkness falls - Rob D
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..why is it destroyin?

The wannabe look-a-likes keeps embroyin
mainstream 'hiphop' continues to destroyin

.:Why wont peeps understand....
That u cant make hiphop.. the way they try so hard,
mainstream is just a virus it was even from the start.
With popular remakes of old songs,.. beats re-used,
the fame of others, without shame just bein abused
Be original atleast try,sick of un-originality jus how i feel,
how dare u, to call it hiphop, & its not even close to real!
U see fake shows,words shouted out&yea it rhymes,
labeled as a genre,but a concept useless like dimes.
When u reach a 100 its close , but still far from real,
stop destroyin,try to hit their heart&write what u feel.
With the catchy beats contaminatin peeps like its a samonella,
likin the song,still i can make u shiver jus spittin at u accapella,
Picture that!?.

Remember HipHop isnt about bling bling cars& a wife,
its pure.. and reflects what we really go thru in real life.


Original a collab ClaustrophobicS but it never was posted so im postin my verse..

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This had a better flow. .Even though at the moment my idea of flow is very unclear. .but the meaning was def. A tight read bro

Thnx bruv

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nice drop,
peeps who say u cant tell flow in text, are talkin a load of bullshit, say the shit in ur head, or out aloud. i liked the flow off this drop.

the topic was good, even though its been used before, you spoke a lotta truth.


That u cant make hiphop.. the way they try so hard,
mainstream is just a virus it was even from the start.
^^^nice line^^^

ur wordplay was simple and at times lacked complexity
e.g
With popular remakes of old songs,.. beats re-used,
the fame of others, without shame just bein abused
^^^first line^^^

but no hate, kept on topic.

aiight peace


and if u ever go in poetry forum please peep my drop in there
its called

life, future, death, past

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This was a great read, i liked the definition in this piece it had good meaning, a true meaning as well, i liked it, keep it up man

An for the RoA i'm working on'a peace right now about how nothing can mean something...i want ye to peep it when it's dropped to see if i've elavated a little in some aspects, that'd be cool if ye cud pz man an thanks

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this was a great drop... it would sound awesome on audio.... you stayed on topic (a good topic at that) and you flowed well throughout... you should've put in some multi's to spice it up but it was nice like this too... you need to work a bit on your wordplay, but for the most part, this was a solid drop... 8/10.. peace

check out my open mic, "Rap Magnetism"... thanks

I like the inside of a song..i want to touch wordplay is sometimes nice, ..but i dont like to use it..i want to write real

Thnx and uppin

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thought the topic was good and the way you got the message across.....yeah thought this was well structured with good flow, i agree bout the wordplay, but think it was nicely done anyways......Pc........

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This Was Good.. Like The More Serious Version Of What
I Did Before. Too Bad I Got Banned For The Time Cuz
This Woulda Made A Dope Collab


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