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Old 11-19-03, 07:27 PM   #1
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SS:Defies Belief.............

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Fuck Structure...hoes...Im letting it go....

Soft, Simple, Is that the Person You thought I'd turn to be?
Ideas, hatred, and first impressions,What you think of me?
Go ahead, spill your thoughts, I have nothing to fight against
I try to give you my best, but in the end, it's still always less
A coward, heartless, no love in life, is that the person you see?
Maybe if you weren't quick to judge, I'd prove wrong your belief
Like, getting to know me isn't hard enough, but Spread rumors?
Just take 10 Minutes to talk, Or is that more than your Ego's used to?

Confused, dazzled, upon the ignorance set foot on our planet now
Knowledge is Power, and the genius is the one who makes no sound..
Society of our Country, The United in all States, and its Contradictions
People are so quick to change, Worship Bush, if he was to get a Crucifixion
Tell Me I am wrong, Tell Me that I don't make You stop and think
Tell Me You don't judge Terrorists, before stopping and Realizing
That America was terrorists to Britain, and we just wanted to be free
Freedom of Speech says you we don't control,But that's what they want you to see
So If maybe the "terrorists" wanted to rid of our "good" influence
Imperialist qualitites of our country, They begin to really fight back
September 11th, 2001 And America Still Doesn't know how to react
So we panic, and the only thing stopping Bush from pressing buttons
Is the Senate...So He wants war with Iraq, and We here,still are reluctant
But it's too late, So maybe there is more to it than the eye can see
More questions to answer,and more people for me to Defy their beliefs..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9634#post919634
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9642#post919642
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9650#post919650
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Old 11-19-03, 11:15 PM   #2
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bitches.....feedback.
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Old 11-20-03, 04:14 PM   #3
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Old 11-20-03, 04:21 PM   #4
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this is a very good drop, had some great emotion and awesome lines, very creative, good sence of style in this piece keep it up... an yo can u peep myn "alyss.....' it's bein slept on thanks man pc
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Old 11-20-03, 04:59 PM   #5
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yo that shit was hoT!! great lines an all dawg!!

feedback please
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Old 11-20-03, 05:29 PM   #6
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this was good, looks like im gonna have to drop a good verse to even have a chance in SS

you had some real good ideas and concepts,

good piece.
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Old 11-20-03, 06:39 PM   #7
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Old 11-20-03, 10:41 PM   #8
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Old 11-23-03, 09:38 AM   #9
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I like how Open Mic has more sleepers than ever.
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Old 11-23-03, 11:02 AM   #10
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Nice Vocab and flow my man = 0

Nice executed and it was a nice read

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Old 11-23-03, 01:08 PM   #11
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TWIN THIS WAS A TWISTED READ I LOVED IT AND YOU SHINED GREAT ON IT SO I CANT HATE
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