every time you touch me i think of you and her...
what you did together...
how you kept it from me for so long,
expecting everything to be ok when you told me..
thinking i wouldnt be mad...
now when you touch me i want to cry,
let loose the torrents of tears that i have bottled up inside,
i wish i had never hear those awful words..
those words that hurt me so bad that i wanted to die...
please help me to stop this from re-bottling up inside,
making me wish for the worst thing in life,
to die,
to have sweet relief from all this pain and all the lies,
and pple wonder why i like gurls more than guys!
but you know what?
fuck you and her!
i'm a juggalette and i wont be deterred!
i'll get a new guy or gurl just like that!
then i'll start runnin with my mutha fuckin hatchet!
runnin to your house and into your room...
stick my hatchet in your fuckin bitch ass face!
then i'll do the same to her!
cept instead i wont kill her strait away..
i'll fuckin torture her till she wants to
die then i'll do it some more!
then when she's asleep
i'll wake her up by chopping off her beautiful fuckin hair!
the hair your hands graced when you fucked her! bitch she was my best friend!


...sry still venting...will pick over later

Wow, this was a powerful piece. Believe me it was felt and I can relate with you. I was cheated on A LOT. It's hard to go through that and it shouldnt even be something that happens. Its obvious you were venting. You did a good job of it. Guess the only thing i can focus on right now is the point that you got across. Good job. Keep it up. Much respect.

i'm sorry you were cheated on...thats just not right...
i feel bad for anyone who had to go thru that...aight well i g2g
MMFCL!!!!
peace

Everything was great up until the juggalo comment in your sig.

__________________

Quote:

Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.

why? i am a lette and i should be able to say what i feel in my sig... what didnt you like...maybe i'll change it...

this piece had emotion, from the title and the first line or two i thought you was going to take it in a different direction.....but you didnt
in certain ways i can relate, but since its for real n from the heart no critiquing is needed
but in reply to your sig, love and friends can betray you sometimes but they arent always bad to you, sometimes love and friends can give you a word of encouragement and that little push to help you through the hard times, once you block yourself from any of the two (love and friends) the true ones will come, and in the end you will lose out.......just how i see it
keep writing

__________________
~.:Soft Focus:.~
{--Deacon (\_/~\_/) Content --}
{-Calisto (\_/~\_/) .:Lady Sage:.-}
{--Filed (\_/~\_/) Domain 9--}
{-Thrust (\_/~\_/) Know1 (\_/~\_/) Emotion-}
{ --Rule (\_/~\_/) Mental God--}
Poetry
Don't Look Into My Eyes Forgotten
Understanding Once Again
"It requires wisdom to understand wisdom:
the music is nothing if the audience is deaf."

yeah i know what its like to be cheated on, happened with a chick i was close to, oh well im married to her now....dope piece but like Necro the juggalette comment was just so arbiturary(sp?)it just sounded stupid, and if u like girls more then guys why do u want to get another guy just like that? it was good emotion but little else, 1luv.

this piece had alot of emotion in it and you could tell as u read it, i know what it is like to be cheated on and i know it hurts nice drop keep up da good work