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Groundhog Syndrome
IP: 5A4B 6334
anotha day i awake to the same tape/
the city feels like its been raped/ dead and cold, everybody at work comes late/ cant changed dat fate, cuz work sucks so ya gotta relate/ breaking backs for a minimum wage, i rather turn a page/ skip to the end of the day to return to our cage/ think your free in this escapade/ hell nah, we in a stale mate stuck unda a system/ Got da case of da blues cuz i cant find my rythem/ sinister people make my life and yours more deeper/ no rock bottom insight, the abyss gets clearer/ fuck, cant stand up to cuz i feel da heat like de niro/ you in distress, fuck waiting for hero/ progress in my city is close enough to negative zero/ too much shit on my head to eat cheerios/ in stereo i come at the end of the scenerio/ time to sleep cuz thats about the only time i be free/ |
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IP: 9F6D CBFC
Alot of work needs done here. Good topic i must say, but you gotta draw the ppl reading it in, and give it that extra bit of depth.. Keep elevating Peace Holla
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IP: C1DA C961
first off i really liked that. i really likes the choice of words.they really gave the song some more meaning. that cherio line was screwed up though. i think you could do good in the future
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IP: F678 AD90
you need to work on your message dawg, and work on elevatin
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