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11-21-03, 02:17 PM
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IP: C1DA C961
yo yo yo yo fire here...flow was nice..went well with the scheme and stayed on track and didn't vear off any other direction...vocab was there at points but some points lacked alil....wordplay would have been better if vocab would have been there but still was nice.....overall this was a good piece very good read...overall 7/10mics
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11-22-03, 06:48 PM
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Hey thanks for the feedback so far..keep the feedback coming in...its much appreciated, thanks.
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11-22-03, 06:56 PM
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i really felt that shit man. the flow was eccelent. i saw alot of emoition. not too many multies in the first verse but the rest of the song was great. keep spittin i really enjoyed that.
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11-23-03, 03:41 PM
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Hey thanks for the feedback so far, Keep the feedback coming in, its much appreciated, thanks.
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