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Old 11-21-03, 10:44 PM   #16
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93377

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Yo shit was tight dude.
good flow, kinda basic but i like the thaughts u had
some words repeated a few times, not bad but use more vocab
otherwise good shit
hit my battle if u can....
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Old 11-21-03, 10:55 PM   #17
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Old 11-21-03, 11:02 PM   #18
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fuck u and your weak ass shit.dat shit licks nuts
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Old 11-21-03, 11:07 PM   #19
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^^^ Hmm.....I feel anger from you my friend. I suggest you calm down. You;re to small to start somethin with me. plez just calm down.
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Old 11-21-03, 11:15 PM   #20
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too small dude ill fuck u up.u dont wanna fuck wit CTF.we run dis shit down here in da dirty tenn.mane u da small weak bitch who need to shut da fuck up.u kno da bizzness!!!?!
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Old 11-21-03, 11:49 PM   #21
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good flow

nice structure

good descriptive words (imagery)

nice closing

overall this was a pretty good drop

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Old 11-22-03, 08:35 AM   #22
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too small dude ill fuck u up.u dont wanna fuck wit CTF.we run dis shit down here in da dirty tenn.mane u da small weak bitch who need to shut da fuck up.u kno da bizzness!!!?!



Bitch shut the fuck up and get out of my fuckin thread. Like I said your ass is to weak and whack for me. Don't think I didnt see that whack shit you posted.
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Old 11-22-03, 08:36 AM   #23
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good flow

nice structure

good descriptive words (imagery)

nice closing

overall this was a pretty good drop

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thanks for the feedback. I'll hit u up
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Old 11-22-03, 12:23 PM   #24
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nice drop overall 7.5/10 ...keep ya head held high
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Old 11-22-03, 03:40 PM   #25
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Old 11-22-03, 08:05 PM   #26
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Old 11-23-03, 02:09 PM   #27
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Old 11-25-03, 04:27 AM   #28
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whats up play your piece flowed well, ended well, some good lines stood out great. Only thing i would work on is uppin the vocab a lil bit but this was a good piece
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Old 11-25-03, 09:45 AM   #29
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thanx man, uppin
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Old 11-25-03, 09:51 PM   #30
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