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11-21-03, 10:58 PM
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keystyled...thanx for feed
IP: A78B 4E05
Im feelin' sedated, unrealated to the world as u take it
Emotionally constipated such that my pupils dialated Virtually thaught violated like someones in my head tellin me crazy ShIt like Light A fIrE unda the Bed Or put ThaT GuN to the Niggas Head that wANNa keep playin Stash the body, have a alibi wit my friend on vacation but Man im just waitin for the day they push the limit its vivid, all the blood on ya walls, i wish you could visit the chamber of the joke, the screams of death makes ya choke ill drain ya body in my tub, put CD on and Soak..... . . . . . http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93377 poll battle^ |
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11-21-03, 11:43 PM
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Aint Nobody Iller Than Me
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IP: 020A 4147
This wasn't all that bad for a keystyle.
Structure was nice Flowed well Could of up'd your vocabulary Maybe slid in some multies Good drop... |
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11-21-03, 11:47 PM
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IP: 99DC 3E53
this was aight, aight.....flow and rhyme scheme was consstent and dope throughout man, a nicely flowing peice. but the content was weak and just jumped around, i couldn't get a singe message at all, that made it a boring read, like theres no reason for me to read it at all.....
return the favor peace |
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