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11-23-03, 10:45 AM
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shit that was tight, excellent vocab bbro. keep doin ur shit.
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11-23-03, 10:47 AM
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good use of vocab, shit flowed,overall good drop
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11-23-03, 11:45 AM
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11-23-03, 12:10 PM
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hot shit man... nice flow
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11-23-03, 07:34 PM
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11-23-03, 08:19 PM
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this was a great piece, it really came across an ryhmed nicely great vocab....nothin really to change...great work keep it up
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11-23-03, 09:36 PM
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i really like dis shit dawg.good vocab.good flow.keep dat shit up mane.
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11-23-03, 10:58 PM
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yeah I agree with everybody else on this...the barz were a little long...but it's all good as long as the flow is on point...as yourz was...and ya vocab was also nice...now holla back at my open mic called "Remember Me??????"
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11-23-03, 11:41 PM
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alrite, could use some more multis in my opinon
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11-24-03, 03:54 PM
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11-24-03, 04:09 PM
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hmmm...
flow-i disagree with people saying the bars are stretched...thats how i write and my shit flows great in my head...only u can know how to flow with it....people read and dont flow..whatever...throw in some more multi's but dont make em too complicated or basic....seems like u used some here just too enhance the vocab...... concept- eh....aight....i guess....if there's shit i didnt catch tell me...but i couldnt put the wholle piece together as a whole....just me though.... lyrically- aight...coulda been more creative with imagery and multis....it was nice with complexity though....keep it up overall i give it like a 6 outta 10...for now... can u please reply with ^^lengthy critique to my open mic ..check the sig...thanx... |
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11-25-03, 08:10 PM
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good shit man! nice vocab. i like how it flowed!
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11-25-03, 10:26 PM
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damn you was HOT dawg
nice stuff good everything shit uuuummmm like wow...um i don't wat say jus keep it up and try some out side stuff get of this site do sumthin peace |
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11-26-03, 07:08 AM
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your flow is jus wicked men!!!! excellent vocab.....u is a guy with some dangerous and intellectually wicked stuff in ya head, you structure your lines perfectly too...
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11-26-03, 01:23 PM
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