Supreme Da Ghost,is da realist//
only smoke on da greenist//
no sticks//mad crystlas//an seedless//
i flip bricks//pac pistols//belive it//
i am so hot man//god damn//head straight to tha top fam//
still be on da block//duckin cops//wit da rock an soft grams//
an if shit get poppin//i got da glock in da trash-can//
round here u stop watchin//u'll prolly get knocked man//
come to da block// tryin to cop//u'll prolly get robbed man//
J-BLOCK//representin wit all my heart fam//
many of u so called mc's//aint even gott it//
ur vocals is empty//cant even stic to a topic//
dog it aint meant to be//I wish u would stop it//
rappin like u hard//but wont step to me//
off the Beat// 5.0 desert eagle'll sweep ya off'a ur feet//
i hear yall niggaz talkin but ya aint about nuffin//
iam da nigga dat'll let da bulldog start barkin//
wit back-down playin in my walk-man//
hollow-tips'll blow ur back-out//
u'll only need a childs casket//
ur another pussy in da back-round//l
ike Black-Child//
runnin behind faggots//Da Ghost nigga what?//
got sigs-calicos-glock semi-automatics//
never scared to let'em go//
Supreme Da Ghost gettin focused masterin tha flow//

-Supreme Da Ghost-

it was ok work on rhyming more and havin better punches

and ya structure need work

you need work but you aint garbage...
it would be better as an audio