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Old 11-23-03, 10:51 PM   #1
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2 confused 2 choose

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had some things 2 get off my chest...

2 gurls that ive had feelins 4..and we both have good relationships..

well there relationships wit there men are fallin apart cuz they ass's...and im dont know wat 2 do if they both ..fall apart at the same..time..
im a wreck 2 think..damn...

well key'd it quick....


why must i decide between 2
nobody knows how ive seen the 2 of u
hurt and broken ive cried at ur sight/
mabe i might fight 4 both of u every night/


i tear in thought of the fear i brought
i cry myself 2 sleep, thinkin so hard juss wanna die
my paper is 2 relive my stess, wen time is worse then best
2 gurls i luv and miss,i cant choose that or this
wat if they came 2 me,how confuzed and afraid i'd be
i say this in my head,juss 2 see where my leading led
mass chaos currupts,if this would happen my heart would bust
im shakin at thoughts how can both be takin
i heard things not sure true yet,but still i'd like 2 forget
some say thats a good thing,but if only u knew wat bad it would bring
they both get tread unfair,still im scared 2 be there
i kno in my heart wats right,but i fight 2 cry and there very sight
im trully scared,if only they knew how much i trully cared
im stuck in between, 2 the mos greatest gurls ive ever seen
id care 4 each one,but right now my decision is not done
i can choose im 2 afraid,this is a mess still dont regret wat ive made
this comes 2 me in a constant flow,both comin 2 me would be harder then a low blow
can decide mind a blunder,if only i could see the future and wonder
i day dream and still havent seen wat this crazyness means
hearts i can not crush,no hurry so y must i rush
they both have there men,y do i feel wen ther hearts break i gotta be there 2 mend
im writin truly glossy eye'd,my emotions are better off on a rollercoaster-ride
difficulties i dont wanna decide,if only i wasnt so scared 2 see wat id find
certain qualites bring-u2-me,mabe i could decide if u 2 would juss sing this 2 me
inch by inch my decision is harder,i care 4 both,and im a backup 2 both not a starter
do either of u see my-care,i can barely bare them hurtin u..if i dont stand a chance Y-CARE
not even a choice 2-make, if i had 2 choose, the pressure on my heart..id-break
i need 2 kno ur feelings 4-me,see and look u both have feelings twords-me
im diggin my hole 2 deep to-see,some think damn kid how hard can this be
i dont know im trully confuze'd, if only i knew.if one was using me 2 be used
dont matter not a facter luv U-2, which one of u feel this way 2
its of my chest but i miss the old days,ill stay wit u both no matter the wayz
juss kno ill care 4 u,wen he gets u down..im always there 4 u/

decidin will be emotionally tough/
even thinkin about this is rough/
if i knew there feelings twords me/
it would be so much ezier 4 me/
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Old 11-24-03, 11:56 AM   #2
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Hey, can you post up your three replies bud?
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Old 11-24-03, 07:29 PM   #3
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FGEE
MASTA C
HIGH CLASS

IF U WANT NE MORE ILL GET THEM.....

KEEP IT GOOD...

PEACE
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Old 11-24-03, 08:16 PM   #4
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IF YA GET A CHANCE 2 DROP SOME FEED...

PLZ DO

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Old 11-24-03, 08:26 PM   #5
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that was deep. i feel where ya commin from. i liked that the rhymes were on one line each, different than usuall but it still looked good. keep elevatin i liked that n want to see more of ur stuff
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Old 11-25-03, 01:36 AM   #6
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Yeah i agree this was pretty deep and it was good...it made a good read man...the flow was good in this, got off a bit at some points though but nothing big....you structured it pretty good i thought but watch the line length on some of the lines though...but overall this was a pretty good piece..keep at it and keep dropping.
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