Dope drop, you contiue to inspire ya bwoy Funn
Every battle emcee imitates or implicates CANIBUS.
JIGGA thought he was B-I-G-
But SHYNE beat him to the punch and sold NOTORIOUSLY-
cats diss him for authenticity-yeah it was fucked up on puffy maybe-
But what of the r-o-c? MEMPHIS and BEANIE-Add up to another of JAY-Z.
2PAC had KRAyZIE-

Blessed... good wordplay......... nice 8/10

hell man only thing I can say was that was some crazy shit. was feelin it the whole way bro. I've always enjoyed reading ur stuff cuz u always come real with it and u say it how it is. but tight shit bro. keep on doin what ur doin. peace.

if u got time peep my collab with 2-Rich called "40's, bongs, an bitchez" and leave some feedback. thanx in advance.

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thnks i will peep that out for you twin no doubt

uppin

well writtin, good way to put together i hook i liked that, your flow was great had some hard hittin lines great read it would sound good in audio, pz man

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The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

tyhnks twin

man, you really are word pefect dog. i like this one as much as your other ones man. you feel me on these commercial clowns stepping out of bounds. they speak nonsense while we, the real m.c's, is trying to suspense.

thanks pop we should adress that in a collab sometime