http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93490
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...2811#post932811

The world is play’n so ima play the world through
Sick of its shit I quit now it’s just me versus you
So prepare for a battle, against ma one-man crew
I won’t be branded a believer, da stigma’s is well overdue
-Social paradox won’t chew. Ima stick it down like glue
I quick review…a lot’a people die from starvation n disease
Alotta people die from war inflicted with no pain eased
Alotta people die from drive-by’s, hell I aint pleased
Just a Couple’a reasons why ima play’n the globe ‘n’ squeeze
-The life from its party leave.. it dead n buried like those lost
Needs defrost and thawed out, it’s running too many costs
The world’s a stage a pot on where it evolved and tossed
-Us, some into maiming ‘n’ hurting and killing for laughs
How it entraps some to darkness and evil without elapse
Bring it down collapse, with united willing slowly filling the gaps
Lifting the shroud dispersing the cloud with true spoken raps
Cos with all the facts, you’ll keep to the right tracks
Well I did, so have YOU discovered What the world really lacks?

nice work, more poetic than rap, but still decent flow, good vocab and content.

improve on flow and no filler next time, but you got this shit down, nice topical piece.

peace

thnx dawg..............................can i get some more thrown this way.....Pz......................................

nice shit dogg