rules, 5-10 bars, no merking off otehr guys lines, no dick rideing, no hate votes,

oh yeh here is the marking criteris,
punches
multies
metas
operner
finisher
personals
structure.

mo merking of lines aalloud, that is a big deduction of points

my lines make you dizzy like a guy bag TAGED,
stumblin structure like a newbie with a KEG!
lieave you wondering weather to neg,
takeing it from a guy named bubba, FAG!
brain freeze make your thoughts lag,
bleedin like a girl all over a rag!
with construction worse than a midget NIG,
meant for something BIG, but still came up short!
with rap waves so quick, your vision i will distort,
like a gym teacher, i cut ya, sayin sorry sport!
and like a jew with a star in a history mag,
smile cause you've just been fuckin TAGED/



explanations,
nig, stands for neigger

the quicker the light wave the more damageing it is to your eyes- rap wave refers to the light wave


jews were taged with a star so they could be identified.

yo voters, i sent out the link to tag, so he should write back sometime..................
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yo this boy has been TAGed, hes a chocker, ............................
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oh well guess he just couldn't take my skills.............
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yo shut this down, we moved the battle to front lines cause nobodie votes on here...........................
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........ and realist if you see this, i want my battle record put back down................

oyo, dis shit is old, we moved it somewhere else, so close it down please..............................
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Close this battle...................................
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