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Old 11-26-03, 11:05 PM   #1
LoCo
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Verbal Illness (16 bars of fire)

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93490
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93983
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94006


This is a freestyle, I spit on an audio, so i just typed it up so u could read it.
16 bars of fire....

my shit is crazy - cant phaze me
blaze me *laughs* u aint ready to detain me
knock heads wit da biggest - recyle your spit
i dont give a shit - ill still merk it
Takin meth and c togetha makes ur brain rumble
hahahaahah i wasnt playin im still sprayin
and smokin at the same time... catch some industry nigga say that in his rhyme...
(not part of the rhyme)
wat jose?ight ill rip it
(back to rhyming)
yo i spit is wit such viscosity got u wonderin odly
wat just entered ur body - ur mind in a bind.
yea i dont get it either, how the fuck aint i signed
neither as i beat her, hers my clip, meet durt
im as tight as ernie and burt, fuck it its ova
i went short - cuz my fuze got pulled
blah blah blah 20 clips 10 men 5 shells 11 kills
peace
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Old 11-26-03, 11:17 PM   #2
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you need minor work but you are off to a great start in this
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Old 11-27-03, 07:26 AM   #3
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you cant flow sober huh. you need crystal meth to enhance your word play fucker
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Old 11-27-03, 07:43 AM   #4
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lol...^
flows alright for a freestyle i guess and so was the rest of it
guntalk etc is wack though
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