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Morning Fog
IP: D7D4 E7DA
Morning Fog
This is.. uh... this is about child abuse between a father and his daughter and her pet hamster. You see the shell, it's a spirit called heart Ringing the bell, you hear it falling apart No one can tell, that the real shell is skin And you know this well, because you've been smoking sin You see her walking, in the mist of the morning Out of her door, out of the fog without warning Predictable each day though as it's just another walk You don't speak to her though, she has no time to talk You try and make the moment last, as she slowly walks past You know nothing about her, you don't know that she's harrassed On always a constant basis by demons that are faceless They are inside her head and you don't know she can't take this But she trys every morning as she walks around the block Hoping that someday that you would just stop If you would be so kind to speak to her, but you don't know what to say It's just the same damn routine, and it just happens every day She just walks right past you barely taking a glance And you stare right at her but you're staring at her ass If you could possibly believe in the possible thought to concieve THAT SHE FUCKING LOVES YOU AND YOU DON'T EVEN FUCKING KNOW IT! But it doesn't matter. Because this morning as you reaching down To grab you're newspaper you see her walk past with a frown Never before had she any emotions on her face But then again never before, had she instigated the chase She said "Come over here." And of course you had followed And then she kissed you, any pride she had she swallowed She instigated the actions and you didn't think twice It was NORMAL... it wasn't naughty or nice It was everything you could conceive, it was what she believed It was love, and love is the oxygen that you breathe And then she ran. She ran so fast. And so did you. Unsurpassed, Where these feelings too. Run into the dark. Run after her. Cigarette spark. Cigarette burn. And that is when you finally realize what the fog is. It's her mind. Gray and formless. And you realize what the darkness is. It's the demons come to swallow her whole. The faceless ones. And you realize what the cigarette spark is. It's you. The filthy wretched being of carnal love. And the only way you can ever find out if you were to help the one woman who loves you unconditionally, to be able to rid her of the demons that haunt her, and to bring her form and mass to her mind... the only way you can ever know if you're capable of doing so... would be to finally look into yourself. And be honest with yourself. Because to lie, would be only cheating yourself. Ask yourself... What if the darkness of the fog wasn't the demons, but was in fact, my own mind? |
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IP: FCDC 4558
do'nt tell us what it's about in the beginning....
i'll hit this up later on..hopefully i remember |
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..terror walks again..
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IP: CEF5 716F
![]() Damn im stuned in what to say in response. this had an overwhelin amount of everything. with a best part is it hadd great flow. honestly, ya deeppness was potent enough to drown a man. remarquable work |
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Guest
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IP: 554A 44F1
Beautiful... I never get bored reading your peices you know that nec? I do agree that I wish you had left the meaning at least until the end, so that we could have created our own meanings but I'm sure you knew that the images you created were no where near a father and daughter abuse situation... and the hamster, I still don't get. But my mind is no where near as deep or complex as yours is... The story telling aspect of this was beautiful! You let us see things, created emotions inside that you could not have just telling me what was happening... mentally I felt like this girl progressed from an innocent child to a teenager, to mid20's and then I felt her older and somewhat like that woman that is constantly beaten but goes back anyways.... I dunno it was well constructed... written, creativly, emotionally... WOW!
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