honestly man, i think this is wick wick wick WHACK, cant hear what you are saying some of your shit sounded rushed too, 1/10 for effort
overall: 1/10 (effort)

lol......i was pissed...any way thanx for listening man.....Pz...jus a quick sumthin.......

no prob man, i mean all you can do is elevate like the rest of us, i just re-read my post and it sounded pretty harsh, just lookin out bro

it was wack, if you was piised, then your excused a lil bit, jus keep droppin.

lol

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okay um that beat was nice...

back up from tha mic an turn ya vocals up when your done.....
do a compression on your vocals i think that will help....

your bars are to short longen em up some you sont wanna let tha beat kill you daddy you gotta kill that shit....

uhruh....get cocky wit while you spittin be thinkin cant nobody fuck wit me so ya confidence will come across(but you really gotta believe it tho) lol......

keep droppin.....

uhh, it was ok man, keep droppin youll get better, peep mines aight?

oh and by the way ppl it was my first drop on audio.....thnx.....

listening to it back i know it wasnt good....next one will be better aight....pZ

What??? man ya from Tha UK....Why ya rap like that?????
" scooby do blue fooby sue who????"....that's what ya soundlike wit that wack american accent

you musta been really pissed...damn..that was really wack!!! not being funny but c'mon you cant be serious..i was laughing..at least thats one thing..

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