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Old 12-01-03, 11:50 PM   #1
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aMPLiFiBiaNS-"Elite Emcees" unfinished

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"Elite Emcees" unfinished

aMPLiFiBiaNS Productions, new track but unfinished

http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=683732&q=Lo

http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=683732&q=Hi

1st verse Mantis and 2nd verse HiGH JiNX

I made the beat

so check it out, feedback please
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Old 12-02-03, 08:49 AM   #2
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the beat isn't too bad... needs more a bass line an' less volume on that circus sounding shit.. flow's a'ight from 1st man.. kinda shakey, 2nd about the same, both need to learn the importance of double time... lol... not a bad track... 1
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Old 12-02-03, 07:18 PM   #3
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thanks for the feedback, uppin
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Old 12-03-03, 11:00 AM   #4
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the beat does need a little more bass, the beat a simple one that you made or whoever, sound like that programme.... cant remember what it called. lol


you got some nice lyrics, the flow aint that best, the second guy pretty much same.
you both need to put a lil more emotion in your voice, sound like you whisperin.
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thanks for the feedback, uppin,

fruity loops, you might be referring to?
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Old 12-04-03, 10:20 PM   #6
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replyin to ya post on my thread

beat def too plain
u need more
and it sound too jingly
or somethin
but yeah
the vocals are def too low
or maybe that jingly circus sound is too loud

yeah
flows both need work
and more emotion and confidence on the mic needed

keep doin ya thing thing
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