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track 11
IP: CEF5 716F
I fucks wit the real
you can fuck the fake touch scrill while I feel on cakes steal on snakes or hijak and pull the steel on fakes my niggas scrape like we cant drive straight doors open erybody out they fuckin seats Like I do for you dont let nobody fuck wit me and take flight like a pilot Comin like a siren all up in you like a virus slugs hitem like a cypher back to back B'legittas burn blunts blow sack to sack and when the worse turn up go strap to strap until claps echo off chests I be the next to off next takin off vests in the west disrespect we be takin off necks like ya wig peice kiss ya girl bye dont 4get to tell ya kids peace we blow zips and roll spliffs outa swish sweets and when I die I still wonder would you miss me "if you can take me away, I'll be with you 2night" "cuz I dont wanna stay, and be stuck on my grind" |
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IP: 340D 8B8F
You need to leave 3 names or 3 links of people you left feedback to or this will get deleted...
But this was ok...structure needs work in this piece, make the lines a little longer and the same length so its structured better...You had some good multies in this though...vocab was ok, needs to be up'd though....your flow was pretty decent in this piece i thought, got off at points....but overall this was ok...keep at it. |
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