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Old 12-03-03, 12:51 AM   #1
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all my niggas hustlas

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Money got a nigga plottin Murder 4 Millions
Fuck how im feelin when its finse to go down let rounds killem
and the case a be another decision to getaway
stuck livin to get my pay wether pimpin or pushin weight
pussy dosia and yay wit fully's toasta's and K's
We plot in strategic
fuck bobbin and weavin when we all squeezin
and what a broad's needin has no meenin in A.O.B (all on a bitch)
Leasin my game for cheese quick to release out my thang for Gs
like its the thang to be
all my niggas hustlas
drug smugglas gun tuckin gurrila muthafuckas
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Old 12-03-03, 01:18 AM   #2
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You need to leave 3 names or 3 links of peoples feedback you left or this will get deleted..

This was alright..i thought you could have made it a little longer though....structure wise was ok, try making the lines around the same length so its structured good, cause you had some small ones and some long ones, try for the same length...vocab in this was decent, could be a bit better...the lyrics were pretty good....flow was alright, got off at spots, try adding some multies to it to help that out...but overall this was alright..keep at it.
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Old 12-03-03, 09:12 PM   #3
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