not completely mastered, and missing the last verse, which will be done by another emcee - just looking for a little feedback on the style, flow, etc.

if you peep lofi links, im sorry - really i am, lmao

lofi - http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=739094&q=Lo

hifi - http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=739094&q=Hi

if you want the DL, which i doubt you will, hit the site and get it - the direct download links dont work like they used to

sup lowd,u remember some guy named spitflame?,or ill lyrical?,we battled before,long time ago,when rapbattle(s) was rapbattle..watevah..thought id give u a feed back..


aight listening..eminem beat..true...u still got that voice box...

flow is aight its on point,u aint that hyped on this...then again,u cant really get hyped on this beat...the track is aight doggy,not really feeling the beat.shit makin me sleep like a mothafucka..


straight track,keep spittin,peep my thread...1

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yea i remember you - you went to RM and shit

good looks on the feedback, i didnt pick the beat - it's just gonnabe on the little demo thing I'm doing since I had it written..