Herez the links:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96415


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96411


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95975

A'ight, here it is.....

[Verse 1]
[E-Lyrical]
You be lookin' at a murderer,
The result of a North American frankfurter,
I murder lyrically,
To quickly,
More sick than a dick-hickey,
To swiftly,
To ill for you to get me,
LET'S DANCE!
Bitch, you ain' got a second chance,
'Cause I'm too big in the pants,
I need 5 fuckin' bitches jus' to lick me,
Go ahead and fuckin' stick me,
You can't defeat G1 and E-L,
Chop ya into cutlets, make it viel, (viel cutlets)
We excel,
Lyrically, we send ya to hell,
Well,
We make you choke,
Like food poisoning from Taco Bell,
It doesn' take much for me to sell,
Slap you an' make ya face swell,
The egg has been hatched,
Detached, into these lyrically attacked,
I broke outta the fuckin' shell!

[Chorus]x2
(E-Lyrical): We grow...
(Gangsta One We pimp hoes...
(E-Lyrical): We rap...
(Gangsta One): That's jus' tha way tha wind blows...
(E-Lyrical): So..?
(Gangsta One): That's jus' tha way tha wind blows...

[Verse 2]
[Gangsta One]
"Pussyplayaz", "elemantary sprayaz," I sort emcee's like cake, an' "eat em in layaz"//
"Abused," mo high than "Dazed an' Confused", hear ma style leave ya "amused"//
Skill "faded", style "vacated", leave emcee's destroyed an' "ejaculated"//
"Masterbated," 'till ya dick was "saturated", niggaz's ryhmes leavin' ya "inflatuated"//
Rappaz come in one flava: "Mustard", no rhymes could "muster", I defeat emcee's thrice at a time, in a single "cluster"//
Nigga, I am "black-rap", defeat the entire RB community in a "single attack", 'till they realize they "wack-is-fact"//
Nigga, this ma fuckin' "comeback", I was gone, me an' E takin "someback!"//

[Chorus] x4


An' tha's tha'...waitin' fo some feedback...

Holy shit, G1 dawg, i didn see ya verse befo...wow...u way betta than me dawg!

^^what he said....

gangsta that was not too bad....good flow...nice shit...E-lyrical..elevate

7/10

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shit was tight....i like the way it goes back and forth....probably flows really well with audio.....i'd like to be able to hear the song........

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Yo, thx dawgz...If I can get enough positive feedback for this shi', me an' E will turn it inta a song...

its ight dont like the way you typed it man

Yo thx dawg I type how I type, but w/e...

Yeah, G-1's verse was better than E-L's, but they were both decent. E-L had a nice little line with that dick-hickey shit. Made me laugh a lil bit. I think if you upped your vocab and maybe threw in a few more multies your shit would be real ill. G-1, your verse was nice, but that "Quotation Marks" shit can get annoying. Most cats are smart enough to catch the punches without them, so I'd leave em off from now on. But from your verse I can see you're decent with the multies and your wordplay's pretty good too. The only thing I could see that needed work, was in both of your verses, yall seemed to lack focuse a little. You should pick a topic and stick to it. But nice drops from both of yall.

Thx dawg, uppin fo mo feedback....

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A slick rhyme there man, nice flow