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Good Luck!!

i'll hit this battle up after both emcees post kna mean but until then hit up my battle (fair is fair) kna mean holla

so i got to start off my saying this
what the fuck is the definition of illness
u think ur cool because ur in a stupid group
so tell me whats so good about it give me the whole scoop
this is my first battle but i aint takin it slowly
hitting the slopes quick like johnny mosely
this shit is quick and is makin u dizzy
ur losin ur mind just like the weight for missy
where did all ur sick rhymes go my man
the fading away slowly like u in quick sand
but that aint my fault u aint go nothin there
no i didnt fuck ur slutty sister, i swear

so what now u think u are some kind of tough guy
hey JIM, how'd it feel to fuck that apple pie
thats what it has come down, fuckin queer
its alright, heres a tissue to help wipe away those tears
face it theres no girls that want a guy with a suit and tie
its not ur fault, NOT ALL OF US just got punk'd by a scrawny white guy

|| Its more brutal but similar to “phone sex” |
|| the way jjkoert is fucked with words |
|| Claiming vets duck with nerves when really |
|| anyone could crush this herb |
|| This is a fauxbout, a virtual battle so ill |
|| have to smack you through your console |
|| Ill rip your throat out to make you choke |
|| and then ill slap you with your tonsils |
|| You couldn’t (w)rap with heat if you were |
|| packing parcels in a furnace |
|| My punches bruise beneath the skin, |
||while your cracking carpels on this wordsmith |
|| You wouldn’t drop hot scripts if your diary |
|| slipped into a firey pit |
|| its clear you admire me bitch |
|| Even with leaded wrists this soon beheaded bitch |
|| couldn’t come heavy with fists |
|| My cleverly scripted disses drag out your pain |
|| as your verse gets steadily ripped |
|| Your so un-self-sufficient you’ve probably got |
|| someone else to fake your coherence |

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ill have to go wit jjokert on this one
better punches
flow was better
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mc bruta

OMG.. you obviously now nothin about rap.. you probably did even understand anything i said....it only take a little bit of common sence its not that hard.. pluse your and herb too what do u know...

i mean common he rhymes group with scoop.and for the record i dont even have a damn sister.. and who the hell is JIM..

his verse made no sence whats so ever. we need some honest votes people..

PZ

/\ dont bitch you fucking fag!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
just kidding haha

opener ex
closer ex
punches ex
personals ex
overal ex

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96373
honest vote

thank you for your time and your vote i appriciate it................................................ .................................................. ...............

i don't have to break it down at all....explict murdered you in every category.......no to be blunt but you need to elevate a lot more before you try and go against the serious heads........

vote on this......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...46&pagenumber=2

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ehh dawg u forgot to poll vote.. vote plz,.............................................. .................................................. ...............

EX got this one, better flow, and punches. JJ had an ok verse but not the greatest disses, kinda played simple shit. EX i like your structure more here. Vote on my battle with spit thanks. 111

nah i did poll vote....someone else forgot.....i don't even have the option anymore....i know for a fact i did b/c i poll voted then posted my reason......

vote on my battle against no abuse in the front lines.......

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was up

lmao at jj verse

wat the fuck was he cryin about lol


yo its obvious my vote goes to XXP he took this cat to the morge

shit XP took this in every category

peace