Yo this was originally posted in Elevated Frontlines by mistake , Young P accepted my challenge late last night , So I posted my verse then , I expect him to have his done some time today ( he's prolly in detention right now ) so I 'll let him slide on the time delay ...


Rules were 10 lines , no feeding , crew ,dr , hateing , biting , recycling , etc .

Oh yea , try and Explain ya Votes ...........

Young P , I've known it , your No Poet , P stands for Prick, and You Blow it
Stepping Up I guess , I wanted a Vet Test ,Then I heard YP likes to CrossDress
Wish I could re-consider this , I wanted a Battle , Not a Sissy Fettish
I Wanted to Take Onna Real Man , P's one dat puts pubes on his Lettuce
Young P prayes on the Weak , Newbies and other Geeks fueled his Winning
Dickryding and Name Disguising is why you see his Record still Grinning
My Truth Hurts him , I spit correct Poison, I'll leave his Brain in Mourning
Surprised Young Prick ?, Yea I Gotcha , Fire my spit like a gun wid-out warning
You Hang around Looking for Pray , No one on your A-list will give -U- a time of day
Camarac , Avalon , All of Em' , Take a Survey , Plain to See YOung "P" is a Full Gay

CrazyE
Peace

*No Disrespect To Camarac and Avalon , Young P has a "Hit List" with their names on it posted in Bitch Slapped

You aint dick suckin, so why is it dat ya mouth is wet.
You a vet, But still use punches bout da alphabet^.
Your avy talkin Fuck RB, cuz you know we all hatin.
Plus you da only kid where his status is da same as his location.
You aint close to ill, but still you aint rhymin well.
You stay 16 but dis battles gonna be drivin you L's (18).
Crazy aint strugglin? You gotta be when da only things you dissed...
Were my name, my age, and my call out list.
My voice rings through your ears... and we only battlin in text.
So this is da part where, if you could afford it, you would pay me my respects.

Somewhat rushed, but should be good enuff. Uppin for some votes. Stop sleepin yall. Link and i'll return da favor wit an honest one for u.

Uh. Dis aint invisible mode ya'll. Someone peep it now. Maybe? Or not. Well Uppin for da second time. Lets see some votes.

Crazy

Young P prayes on the Weak , Newbies and other Geeks fueled his Winning
Dickryding and Name Disguising is why you see his Record still Grinning
1st descent punch, wtf did the Lettuce line mean.?

And the rest was ehhhh. You need to practice how you word your punches. You had em but they were either semi-flipped off a played concept or were just worded bad.

Young

You aint dick suckin, so why is it dat ya mouth is wet.
You a vet, But still use punches bout da alphabet^.
started with a personal, descent

Crazy aint strugglin? You gotta be when da only things you dissed...
Were my name, my age, and my call out list.
and your last noticable punch of the battle. [personal

Overall
Crazy came with some weird shit, i dunno what some lines meant, like the Lettuce on the Pubes, and if they didnt make sence they were just completely irrelovent to the line before and/or after. Young didnt have a remarkable verse but he had 2 lines that hit, PERIOD. that won it.
Vote Young P

Pretty off the wall content from Crazy...

Young P came alot weaker than I'm used ta seeing...

But, he had some tight personals, hard punches, decent wordplay, and good flow throughout.

Sorry, not throughout...
That closer was bitten/recycled/borrowed, whatever...

From a battle in Elite, I think Av vs Ev...

Not taken verbatim, but the concept's the same.

Aside from that, this was one sided...

Crazy had some downright strange subject matter, stretched lines, and re-hashed punches that just didn't come together.

I mean, ya called him gay or referenced it in almost half ya lines.

Come up with something else, man.

Peace!

Holla back...
Need a vote...

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exactly the same as me then.....

'Crazy came with some weird shit, i dunno what some lines meant, like the Lettuce on the Pubes, and if they didnt make sence they were just completely irrelovent to the line before and/or after. Young didnt have a remarkable verse but he had 2 lines that hit, PERIOD. that won it.'

Vote = YoungP

can y'all check this out....he has run off scared....so no need for your votes yet, jus let me know wot u think of my rhyme.....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1239#post971239

thanks

Breakdown:

Punches: Young P
Flow: Young P
Creativity: Young P
Vocab: Young P
Enjoyment: Young P

Overall: Young P

One sided, bu a'ight I guess...

Hey there BTK. Actually youre rite. I wuz wonderin where i heard somethin like dat. Wasnt da same lines tho, just the same concept, so it wuznt bit fool. Uppin.

ehh.....good battle.............breakdown

punches - p by a little
multies - crazy
flow - tie
creativity - tie
structure - tie
opener - tie
closer - p

overall - p...........
p wins by more than a little bit..........

peace

hit this up!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97258

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