Aiight 10 lines

Blah blah blah you know the rules

You Spit First ~1

Aight. Check this shit:

Second star to the right and straight on till morning leads to Neverland/
You musta been hangin' with Michael Jaskson, gettin' ass raped while you give him hand/
Young Hercule$ you a joke in Rap Battles/
You'd do better off battlin' babies dissin each others rattles/
Ha you make me laugh, with ya little preschool raps/
Man, grow up, and stop takin' baths with other experimental chaps/
Yo Herc, stop beatin off to the sound of Thriller/
With the smoke of a blunt, I'll turn into a gay lord killer/
I don't know what ya problem is but you need to get away from Jacko/
Cover ya chest with a vest to protect ya self when I go wacko/

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The Madman

Breakdancer in Brooklyn

Im serving this clown with french dressing,
since the only time you drop heavy bars
is when you cant finish benchpressing
Ive caused this whore stress and depression by
making him lay his best shit hence the clenched expression
If you went to confession in christs church and had your
writing censored you still wouldn’t spit nice words
Ill bury you alive in a midgets casket so your last
speech is the only time you leave a tight verse
Showing his friends his football sticker collection
is the only time anyone admires his prose(pro’s)
Ill flip the scripts and cripple this bitch with
acidic spits that corrode your name
Your road to fame has been blocked by my attacks,
punching so hard your p.c screen explodes in pain.

-Young Herc

Uppin.

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hahhah... madman-doubleSS you had an ok verse.. but if i could poll vote i would vote for Young Hercule$..he str8 up killed yo ass

he had better punches good meta's and ok wordplay

you need to elevate a bit madman

Damn..... Young Ripped this ish, Madman....it just wansnt enough, tha breakdown:

Madman: rhyme scheme: 6, flow: 6, wordplay:6, total:18
Young H: rhyme scheme: 8, flow: 7.5, wordplay: 8, total:23.5

this was not close, madman dont quit elevate, nyce drop young, stay real, peace, 1

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