'Gazeebo, no offence man but ur punchlines are played out, the fertilizer thing, and the momma telephone number. Just work on ur punchlines, and i think u'll b better. Just my opinion.'

a feel the same way dawg, thanks for saving me the typin

vote = poetic

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97113

uppin (4)....sleepers......post a link, I'll leave honest feed back....oh yeah...good battle gazeebo

Poetic took this with a tighter format, better wordplay, some cool multi's, and punches that hit just a bit harder...

Gazeebo was pretty good, but propped himself a bit and used a threat or two that didn't add up to punches.
(The "scales" line was funny as shit, though, props!)

Close battle, but for more brought to the table, Poetic.

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uppin (5)....come on ya'll...two more votes and this is finished...end this~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~