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Old 12-08-03, 10:28 PM   #1
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Exclamation oh shit! mami's back

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[B] Blue O NO! the young one is back doing what she use to do//
gone for a minute, dont try to holla, im not use to you//
King Of Theives my nigga come holla at 'cha girl//
so i can be back to makin yall niggaz heads twril//
bitches like, what in the world? im just that nice//
while yall niggaz rockin copper ( ) my ass is rockin ice//
young Trialz on the map, was gone, now im Hollin' back//
still gangsta holdin the gadge, and got 10 bricks and macks//
listen niggaz, im ready to merk ya//
and please belive, mami know how to work ya//
plus im not tryna hear it from niggaz thats bitch//
only the ones that can top dawg handle there shit//
but if a bitch got a fuckin problem//
they know what to do. pluss i'll solve em//
im back and makin an intro on this shit//
makin niggaz hot, even got bitches rubbin there clit//
i aint gay, but i have that affect on people//
ya think im hot now?? just wait untill my sequal//
cause im bad and i hope yall dont eva for get it//
well....ya cant, its already jogged in ya memory..

Holla Back
Lil Mami just hit the building.........AGAIN!!!!!
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T.K.O's-Mc Aines..........and more to come............
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Old 12-08-03, 10:30 PM   #2
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THAT WAS TIGHT SIS MUCH LOVE MA
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Old 12-08-03, 10:35 PM   #3
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You need to leave 3 links or 3 names of people you left feedback to or this will get deleted..

But this was alright i thought...your structure seemed to be pretty good in this, maybe a bit of a touch up but nothing real big...flow was alright, stayed on point in here mostly...could have added a few more multies and internals to this i thought...but keep at it.
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Old 12-08-03, 11:26 PM   #4
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i liked that shit it was hot, flow was good vocab and multi's were there and your actually nice for a femcee keep it at
p.s if you need a team holla at me
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