Introducin Da Hit Squad, Step aside weak niggas yall ain't hard, Spit ill but secretly your words a fraud.

Only possess ace cards, Don't get me started cause when I rain lyrics it's an army of ice shards.

Defensive mechanisms, Block fake niggas out my system, So I can concentrate on you as tha victim.

I move like shadows, Peep my murder count within tha gallows, Inject banana clips of hollow tips and shoot it like Rambos.

Hidden cameras cause spaztics, Bullets scatter askin you to catch this, Got courage? Approach my mist.

I'm spittin in masses, Land grabbin like fat chick's asses, Take tha 9 n stash this, Feds in my rearview glasses.

Niggas got guns but scared to pull it, There's nothin to it, Watch as I pacify this fake with a dozen bullets.

I'm a fuckin murderer, Walkin ten deep you heard of us, Seen me wearin all black lookin like a burgalar.

Invadin your premisis, Move like a nemisis, Precise incidents, Incredible Hulk-type arsonist with raw spits.

Beatin your carcass verbally, Physically breakin your bones causin your soul to leave you asleep.

All of you kats just gamecocks, In tha rookie stage still cause ya name ain't yet flocked, Get off my jock.

If you so raw nigga pull ya gun, They say I play too hard with two hands so I purchased a hand-gun.

You come to my turf and pilgrimage, I'm a rush ya ass as soon as you think to pass my line of scrimmage.

Flows eat you like acid rain, Burn you like flames, I exert tha pain quick like I was dosed with cocaine.


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the structure needs a lil work,
you used a fair few multies, some simple vocab and wordplay,
some of the multie use got out of hand.

jus keep elevatin

peace

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Yeah this was alright here....like Double said you structure could use some work though, your lines are kinda stretched out but you can fix that up easy...flow in this was alright...your vocab could be up'd a bit though...but this was alright....keep at it.

Up'.

it was a ok piece flow was ok vocab ight wordplay ight punch ight multi ight overall 5/10 keep rappin