ayo

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no hate
no crew
no d/R votes
muste quote favorite lines
must explain well...

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iight yo ¢hekin in................................................ .................................................. .

I'mma snap at ya neck....you fall short to grasp at the teck...
cause Pay Laughs at a Vet....you can't even DRIVE but your demanding respect~/~
Call BET please film this...me merkin YAZ as PAy killed THIS....
even if ya Head was Under Aids you still Couldn't Define ILLNESS~/~
fi defeat is ya GOAl...shit pay showed up to shatter dreams
even if i Slaughter on your TURF you still couldn't lay Streams~/~
even when yaz is facin the facts...watchin guys backs yaz still gets wrecked quick......
ivest bitch in L's cause your stock is lacin tracks when sucking dicks~/~(gay porn)
i slaughter a weak cat....ya collapse like weak lungs ya not holdin WINds/(wins)
smack you and Crack a grin cause Pay dishes L's before matches even begin~/~
You couldn't match fists aim and missin....leathel additions....
like mathematics cause when i add my words its DEATH ON INCISION~/~

fuck it i'm done

y u keep mentionin yoself in da first person
dat ain't gonna get ya to fame, it juss ain't workin
im not meenin to bite of this kats verse
but iz to funny i kant stop, like i dunno waz worse
u thinkin u kan aktuly win with dat shit
damn thaz juss like me sayin im to ligit to quit
kuz i ain't no m¢ hammer but u still kant tou¢h this
im to ni¢e wit da mik, u kan tri but u gonna miss
im muss be like a whole new prospektive to this rap game
weird verse, played lines, and those ~/~ things are enough to drive ya insain
fuk up your optiks or shatter your speks like glass...
i juss gotta ask one thing, do u hate me, i know the awnsers Yaz

*YOU* muss be like a whole new prospektive to this rap game
weird verse, played lines, and those ~/~ things are enough to drive ya insain

um yeha ok uppin people............................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...

Yaz took this in every category.......

specially liked his closer!! very nice

wasnt feelin the other guy's verse to be honest!

no hate

vote = Yaz

thats bullshit really//////and you all know it.......lmfao.....uppin.......................... .................................................. .................................

weak battle but paynimo took this, i think he gave more effort
flow/yaz
wordplay/yaz
punches/nimo
personals/nimo
meta/draw
multi/draw
open/nimo
close/draw
vote/nimo
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finally a decent vote.............uppin on this.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ................

Aiight........

Pay:not bad kinda weak tho shoulda came stronger den dat!!.....seemd like u think u too nice,well u got another thing comin!

slaughter a weak cat....ya collapse like weak lungs ya not holdin WINds/(wins)
smack you and Crack a grin cause Pay dishes L's before matches even begin~/~

^ dat wus ur best bar!!

Ok Now.......

Yaz:nice verse punch's were hittin flow was on point!....good shyt and keep dat shyt up!!

y u keep mentionin yoself in da first person
dat ain't gonna get ya to fame, it juss ain't workin
im not meenin to bite of this kats verse
but iz to funny i kant stop, like i dunno waz worse
u thinkin u kan aktuly win with dat shit

^^ not bad keep it up!!

Vote:Yaz

0n3

blahhhhhhh on that vote homie.............really uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..............

uppin numba 1 yo...................... hit diss shit up an drop a link, il be mo then glad to vote on it................................................ .......

good battle thought it was tight

flow pay
wordplay pay
vocab yaz
punches pay
multis pay
over all vote paynimo