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[Fair Trade.]
IP: F353 17E4
Some Work for Little, While others do Little for Work
Bones Become Brittle, Then their backs Cripple Worse Unwanted Torture, Yet Mumbles haven't Tore-Chores Debated actions outcomes to Not help, with More For For More, Scoured Laws Don't give them Enough Help The rich has the Decision, Visions to Buff their Wealth Has Derision to Stuff the Health of Innocent Children Govermenst Have & Now been saying we ' Will Then ' You Kill Men, Starve Kids, Then act like they Par | Dial False connection, Conception Like Eminem Laid | Rap I Say That, Becuase your minipulated and Not Aware If you see the Efforts Cheap you would Stop n' Stare Hairs Shocked, Scares Proped like Jodie Marsh Boob Big Harsh News, Its Real that many people are Killed Through the Lack of Appeal so they can Scarp a Meal They're From where Food From thats on Your Tongue That One Swallow, The crumb that follows in the Gum Would Stop them Dying in heat thats Got them Frying Like your Chips Cooking, Let Alone, The Trips Booking They have to arrange, To get little money, Fo' the Kids To be poorly educated, Surely dedicated in Mo' to Live So help them, Seriously. They want to be helped, You must Help. |
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IP: 409D DA38
it was a ok piece vocab was good multi's ok flow ok punch ight wordplay ok over all 6/10
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IP: 5AF5 5CA5
yeah good piece i thought.......good flow going....some nice internals n metas...good to see more complexity, the last couple i read lacked....flow was on point yeah good drop....pZ......
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IP: A9A7 727D
links, homie, links
I will reply to this when you drop them
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