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Nice piece, very deep... i relate. Needs more multi's tho... keep it up.

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this was a good piece and yeah dogg i like yo flow, master c u was cool to, coz it was a kinda soft thang dont worry about any punch lines or shit, coz it was bumping in my mind, 9/10

YO, KNOW WOT U FEELIN ON THE LADEEZ. ITS BAD WEN U FEELIN THAT WEN INNIT. LIKIN THIS VERSE. QUITE TIGHT.

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eh yo i waz feelin ya here, 5oundz like 5umtin id 5ay ta ma girl juss put in rhymes ya know, i give thyz a 10/10... (highe5t mark i eva gave lol) yo keep dat flow goin, dat 5hyz hot

shit was dope.......i have soe shit on this topic.....its pretty dope......if youz ever write another i'd like to partake
structure was good from both....
vocab nice, metas nice....
good imagry.....
stayed on topic well......expressed the topic well....verses were even, good job fellas keep it up

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