10-20 lines...
all RB rulez applied...
check in then drop...

g'luck............................................ .................................................. ..........u'll need it...

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check check...

imma get out-a school soon so i'll hafta spit a lil later...

hopefully tonight, othawise fo' sho tommorrow at this same time...

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yo i oblivarate and decimate you emcees- to -be\
crushing blows to da chest will make it difficult- to- breath\
my skimatics of theatrics are the toughest , just- ask -jeeves\
my awesome schemes alieviate to regulate-ya-c.r.e.a.m\
split splins down your spine ta reorganize-ya-vicious-dreams\
lyrically , physically , hypothetically\
my verbally database will outlast you enegically\
welcome to the point of no return-your-enigmas-i-burn\
read my lyrics wit both eyes will help-ya-ta-learn\
im well endowed wit these rhymes thats shine in my mind\
and my poetic octives are one-of-a-kind\
ill leap to heights beyond what you can peak\
born to scorn these rhymes that i reap\
peep\
dont be a blinded dude, ill sub-zero you\
youll end up being a spineless fool\
check it!
yo the textual jesus has risen\
to cut your ego like foreskin in circumcisions\
to entercept these visions of the knife slitin\
must meen your rhymes are slippin\

yo lemme change octives, cuase his optics \
are causing his eye nuerons to see false objects\
im enraged wit violence cause this cats eyes are estranged wit closed eyelids\
cause blind men who are rhymin cant see what their decyhpering\

im hacking you like we've just pulled down saddams statue\
i aint mad at you, but your attitude is beginning to tumble down at you\
fuck grattitude im reaching altitudes beyond what the marines plant in you\

your foolish and clueless wit rhymes that are useless\
like your girls fisted uterous that ive vandalized and abused kid\
wit four fingers and a thumb in , my nails are clawin her inner skin\
deeper than , till i reach the babys den, open my hand and realese the rage within\
than cage it in , nine months later my enigmas blaze the hate within\
crushing ya heart again and again , disrupting your family visions\
grafical incisions wit pricise division, multipilied by my lyrical addition , equals your inert dicisions\WHOA!




maximus is true to this\
unstoppable bruttalness of fetus hateful cruelness\
like brutus to ceaser you maybe the leader , but your lyrical death in nearer\
stab wound will reverer and adhear till you disipear\
crystal clear ill affects are near, and hunting ya down like a lion to a deer\


my rudeness of lyrics is crushing you like recycled cans\
cause im devouring and scouring your plans\
u know the ones that are typed wit your four fingers on your hands\


go ahead rhyme on the net\
but till i see an audio all you are is just a blinded vet\
led by certified diabled pets\

you think im weak , go ahead and spit dis shit to a beat\
and see what you think, maybe i should speak to a shrink\


what!!



hardone-maximus

yo, read tha fucken rules man...
10-20 linez only...
but it's ok...
i only need 20 anywayz to beat that No Punches, Wack Ass Verse

here we go...

damn son... hold onto ur ransom... same way u hold a tantrum...
matter of fact... here's tha pallete to MS Paint... so paint a hand-gun... <<profile
dude, where were ur hits at?... i could've beat u wit a wiffle bat...
left u confused in tha lost n never found along wit this n that...
get caught up in something u may never be able to understand...
like freestylin... ur 25 n yet ur on tha net n not a man... <<profile
lookin up porno's and free ho shows but it's no mo'...
ur mama done blocked all but tha educational sites... so u bored...so?
and then u start to wonder why this site is gettin through...
man...pay attention... it's because i was teachin u...
ur a wack rook who don't know wat a battle is...
this guy's only wordplay was in highschool when he was titled: "Scrabble Kid"...
i rattled him but i'm not a baby... u's tha one who shit on urself...
cleeean tha diapie... now child support got u lower on ur wealth...
but that's not possible... cause very soon u'll have to pay for tha hospital...
that's i put u in... bet u never thought in ur life... i'd be 17 yet hostile...
u have just been murked... worked more than jason mask rapes...
or Jackson "in ur son (sun)" on tha beach... cover u wit electical black tape...

-- done --

we got straight guys and lez's on RB.... so it's Bar None...
and that's probably tha reason nobody will feel tha "Hard One"...

murkin...

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damn, here's the breakdown.........hard how do we know that wasn't pre-written? you didn't have any personals really or any punches........your multis were good and you got a nice written style but angellical actually researched about you to come up with some good punches and personals and good all around flow....hard one your vocab was good to but that verse could've been directed to anyone, not very precise to your opponent......return the favor and drop an honest vote on the battle in my sig..................peace...........

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well mine goes to angel, punches personals and dude wht the fuck you spit like 280 verses, what are you thinking vote for my battle need to be ended, seriously click the link at the bottome one VOTE ANGEL

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you new to RB, man bet you get dissed alot//
if you was a child molest youd still get dick alot//
what is you confused cant member which team you be with//
i know you shirts old navy but your mouths on seamen//

damn yo... ive seen a grip of dumb ass fuckin shit today... and then this foo shows up tryin to jack the name... and disgracin it by spittin some bullshit like that, that wasnt a battle verse dogg, that was a fuckin epic, and one nobody read and shit... anyway angellic came kinda weak had some personalls and shit but was kinda weak... but u followed the rules so i gotta respect that..

VOTE: Angellic

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Flow-AngelicR
Multies-AngelicR
Structur-AngelicR
Punchs-AngelicR
Opener-AngelicR
Finisher-AngelicR

Overall-AngelicR

No Hate But Hard One Had a Whack Verse....BUT AngelicR Won In Every Catagory Because Hard One Had No Personals His Structure was Every Where...

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yo angel takes it....

hardone....ur verse kinda went on and on and on and on and on.......not throwin many punches...just kind of rambling....structure was fucked too which messed up the flow a bit

A's verse had the flow/structure/punches right on point. some pretty hard punches in there landed.

nice battle. my vote: A

yo could yall hit up my battle wit an honest vote plesae...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98091