12 lines max...deadline to spit by is 11pm tomorrow eastern time

5votes
no dk
no crew
no hate

all votes must be explained

Catagories:

opening
flow
punches
metas
multis
complexity
vocab
structure
closing
overall
my vote

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^^breakdown??>..i dont care....fuck it...........




Torn with torment, tryna distinguish fake from real..
cuz Celestal Dialect even Envies his own Skillz...*
you define Ill? well my last 2 battles toppled ya top dogs..
you the 3rd faced with GameTime and insurmountable odds..**
structurally off..ya diversity worst as it expands its alias..
tryna elevate? off to a new start..im on top & u scaling it..
ready to be tossed..lost in a wave of tidal drops..
didnt wanna take it personal so he took his sig off..***
still hit below the belt..u felt a jolt from ya waste down..
couldnt vote 4 himself..so tells voters to follow his own breakdown..
ya weapons..consist merely of unfathomable questions..
like how is wackness considered a murderous method?****


*his name was Envy Skillz

**third straight battle against DOI

***he had some shit iin his sig..but took it off when he made the thread..i wasnt gonna diss his sig anyway

****he leads DOI as far as battlers are concerned..called murderous methodz..

iight...

I'm deeper than pockets revealin ya sockets peelin n poppin, Basically im endin ya life
Drop game wit tenses of fright I'll have u watchin ya mouth like we was in a dentist fight
Comin face to face wit me u’ll be beheaded head reddened, call me out now dead n sore
Curse ya verse when I lurk, ya rap is just like a 2 by 4 cuz it already has everyone board
U aint done, taken out of the oven early,nothin but bad badder (batter), u get up n shatterd
Ya neck will get splattered, ya lyrics are dormant, they fall off like Narcoleptics on ladders
My bullets disintegrate your rhymes puncture tendents, Commin hard n crack yo cranium
Freestyles?? He couldn’t come off the dome hard while diving off a 200 ft astro stadium
Carry your flows up out this shit before you get whipped n Celestal has to bury you hoe
12 lines...please my verse can hit ya long distance like I'm calling different area codes
Hes getting ripped worse then he did wit brix, smoka, n Ace then raped like April Lebrex
Putting holes threw ya chest, the only positive lines he ever touched was on his HIV test

Explanations

11th line:

April lebrex is a person who was raped by 14 men at a rave in S.F

(edited for explaination^^)

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blha......lets get some votes or someshit.........uppin#1....

i removed that shit..no beef....just votes......

no beef game time.....nice battle

uppin for some votes................

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opening-Envy
flow-GameTime
punches-GameTime
metas-Envy
multis-Envy
complexity-GameTime
vocab-Envy
structure-tie
closing-Envy

overall:Envy 6-4

Celestal = 8/9
Game = 7/9

my vote -Envy Celestal

uppin #2...........

removed both..now votes need to come.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..........

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up up and away

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Okay, kind of one sided, good battle though.

Opener: Envy
Flow: Envy
Structure: Envy
Rhyme: Game
Punches: Envy
Disses: Game
Wordplay: Game
Closer: Envy

Vote: Envy

wow..hom much do i agree w/ gametime..
you cant put that b4 a verse.....................
thats like dddddddd damn!!!
you spit ya verse thats it...maybe explanation if needed
I'll hit this up wen that text is removed...
Gametime i suggest you report it
so its removed pz
no beef to any of you so plz dont bitch at me

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"Woop Woop, its the sound of da police"

my last uppin for today

and i took my shit out game time...take out yours then it'll be straight...no beef

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uppin #3.....shit is getting mad slept on............

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come on.......uppin # 1 for today


need some votes cats...come on.....

vote up peoples.....


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