most rappin niggas is pussies aint no dick b-tween dey legs
want it wit me put a heat to ya head and scramble thoughts like eggs
i'v earned tha right to say i'm 1 of tha best in C.O
but im constantly slept on like i was made at denva matress co.
flo is remarkible wouldnt believe dat im unda age
got so many hits u would think i'm a blackplanet page

holla back drop honest opionions

But this was aiight A bit short though you coulda done betta than ya did..Ya Structure was off and ya flow was alrite all and all a good effort Aiight Keep it comin and ya Might Get betta so Keep Flowin and Dropin ya Open Mics Man Peace....

a bit short i thought u maybe could have stretched it a bit.
flow was a bit hard to find in places, but wordplay was decent. keep writin' and u'll get better.

hit my rhyme
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98014

cheers

sorry to say but this wasnt good at all, try to elevate g, yo rhymes were ok but had lil meaning, and it was shorta dan a muda fuka.

HONESTLY - PRETTY WEAK. TOO SHORT FOR AN OPEN MIC BUT WORDPLAY IS SO-SO................................................ .............

wack wack wack............what was that bruv.....elavate