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Old 12-12-03, 10:06 AM   #16
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another good collab west.
nice imagry, multis, structure and wordplay. flow was there for me.
the first verse i thought was the better out of the two.
dope piece dawg.
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Old 12-12-03, 02:29 PM   #17
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Old 12-12-03, 08:05 PM   #18
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Old 12-12-03, 09:54 PM   #19
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Old 12-13-03, 08:01 AM   #20
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edicius shone in this piece.. I think your lines were a bit stretched, but your inner multis really helped it flow.. if you had multis at the end of your lines aswell it would've of been near perfection.. seriously.. The content from both was good enough to keep my interest.. Good job both of you..
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Old 12-13-03, 08:04 AM   #21
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^Fuck u hoe it wsnt stretched = (


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Old 12-13-03, 09:09 AM   #22
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Damn dawg, shits blazin...i love this new style of yours, you've decreased your bar length and it's came out tops..the flow has improved beacause of that...you had dope rhyme scheme and mad internals, vocab was immaculate as usual...loved the imagry you portrayed here....damn!

Edicius
your style has also been adjusted (i think)... you have alot more internals and you manipulated words..screwed them about which was off-the-chain. Real gritty emotion here (from both parties), you too portrayed a ill fearful image...the wordplay you used was a nice addition too...tight.

4/5..nuttin bad to say about it..keep this shit up, shit was blazin.
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Old 12-13-03, 09:27 AM   #23
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