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12-14-03, 05:53 PM
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Thug Lyfe
IP: C1DA C961
Verse 1:
I force myself into ur ears like Kobe on fuckin females otha MC's derail an bump sales jus 2 prevail, in da industry, shady figures hopefully 1 day will c hell but in da present all we can do is pray dat we dont c jail recievin mail from federal agents, identity steady changin police raids keep us vacating our mutha fuckin stations heart 4-ever stay racin, pace maker 2 pace it, trippin offa dis chronic as if somebody had laced it playa hatta's is trippin, pray de neva catch me slippin leave wounds so big they'll need extension cords 2 stitch em Hook: HOLLA THUG LIFE BITCHES!!!!!! Poverty stricken children AND 2 ALL MY NIGGAS!!!!!!!!!! strugglin jus through livin IS IT REAL OR FICTION!!!!!!!!! and 2 all those we missin stay true through da mission HOLLA THUG LIFE!! Verse 2: Semi-Automatics replaced wit mike stands on stage MC's go out in a blaze of unattainable rage and holla thug life, made da transition became witness screamin on mikes like 20 women all in semmision in da same no1 listen 2 pac till he switched positions and changed da words revolution 2 thug livin got shot in vegas an months lata his former freind Chris did and 2 all who died 4 der beliefs, only bleesins Hook 2X: haha thug life princible of poverty, injustice, an missery thug life da revelotion of american upcoming haha |
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12-14-03, 06:21 PM
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IP: 63D7 39EF
Ok this is your 3rd or 4th open mic today and none of them had links/names of replies...Start leaving your links/names or your pieces will get closed.
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12-14-03, 06:24 PM
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IP: 83F4 23B1
this is averge..nuttin special..make your verses longer if your gonna make a hook like a song...and atleast have 3 verses
keep elevatin |
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12-15-03, 02:48 AM
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-Real Time-
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IP: FDD6 AE15
You Really Suck... Wow... Kill Yourself Now...
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12-15-03, 02:56 AM
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IP: F354 9C29
^^ LoL
Work on your vocab.. It was an ok piece.. Jus keep elevating
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12-15-03, 04:15 AM
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IP: 02B3 389F
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12-15-03, 02:03 PM
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IP: 5855 B959
this was aiight
you went off topic alot tjhough you'll improve 4.5/10 |
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12-15-03, 02:07 PM
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Banned: Spamming
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IP: C1DA C961
..This shit is garbage...your wordplay sucked...your concept sucked..overall..you sucked...
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12-15-03, 03:35 PM
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IP: C1DA C961
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12-15-03, 04:49 PM
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IP: 4577 CD9A
Not Feeling This At All...Fake Ass Ja Rule...And Ja Rules Fake, So Your Fucked
Peace |
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12-16-03, 09:13 AM
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IP: 2614 26EA
yo sureal take it easy but ya it did need some work
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12-16-03, 09:22 AM
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IP: FF89 3C60
This was ok...
Nothing special. Pretty good hook... But the rest was the same fake ass wanna be gangsta shit I've heard a hundred thousand times. Grow up some, LA_4LYFE... We ain't buyin it. 4.75/10 Peace
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