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nice battle peeps.

but kinetic took this one, he had harder htting punches an a lot more quoteables.

gangsta you need to fix your structure, maybe that will make your verse easier to read, an if you have clarity with your punches that makes them hit harder.

kinetic, you just have to elevate dawg, and eventually start battlin vets.


PLZ DROP AN HONEST VOTE ON THIS BATTLE SEEMING HAS I HAVE TAKEN TIME TO VOTE ON YOUR
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98764

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What up. My vote go's to
kinetik. His flow was nice,
good meta's, Punches
and stucture.

This battle go's to
KINETIK

>>>>> ONE >>>>>

pretty good battle

Gangsta dropped tight good switched up flow.....

not hard enough, or wit enough punches

knetick gottem wit structure, vocab, metas and punches.

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you guys have to have better explaining then that
the battlers won't know what they did better than the
other guy
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flow-tie
personals-gangsta 1
punches-gangsta 1
humor-definitly gangsta 1
entertainment-gangsta 1
structure-kinetic
opener-gangsta 1
closer-kinetic(very dope)
i'm'a give it to gangsta 1
entertaining battle
nice job

^^^ that was meant to the guys on the first page
that only posted 2 sentences
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gangsta 1 gets my vote.

his punchlines were harder and more complex, I fukkin hate 1nes structure tho, you need 2 elevate that flow...nevertheless..his wordplay was pritty nice, an his directness was also correct. so overall, Ima give this to gangsta, but kin ain't no newbie..i see nuff wins in his future..

vote on this battle in return...

cannabarz vs gazeebo

thanx....

Yo, Kinetik ya mutha fucka, ay ass is busted. You 'n Bloody Nightmare have tha same IP Adress. Ya voted fo yaself, you cheatin' faggot. Ya don' have 100 posts, but if ya did, ya woulda took tha fuckin' opportunity. Fuck u, fuckin' cheater.

Can't poll but this will up your battle: Vote ken][ik.

He came with the heat dawg, strait up. He had a nice flow and structure. His verse was just a good quality verse.

Damn if that's true than i take back what I said. that's a busta move if you can't let your shit speak for itself.

kenitic got this but he cheated so fuck teh bullshit, i vote for gang one, just cuz the other foo is fuckin gay, and gangstaone u need to battle some more and try new things and see if u can elevate cuz it looks like u have some potential
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