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12-15-03, 03:56 PM
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uppen
thanks for the feed
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12-15-03, 10:01 PM
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ya had a good flow... and your structure was good...
I liked this line... I thought it was mad tight... "The year is changing like the baby who was born in december Gods cryin rain to wash up snow another season to remember" ^^ill as fuck... mad props on this shit mang... Ima keep peepin your drops... mad impressive peice... ~AshY~ |
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12-16-03, 04:28 PM
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thanks for the replies...keep em comen
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12-17-03, 07:43 AM
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12-17-03, 09:39 PM
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uppen for some responces
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Open Mics The Weathers Art http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673 My Teenage Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850 Secluded http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851 Open Your Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461 |
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12-19-03, 12:09 AM
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i liked this man this was tite. good structure and flow. nice use of vocab. keep this shit up man!!!
ma fav rymes was prolly this one but i liek them all ya got mad skill!!! From the smallest insect to the largest bear summers majestic With a symphany of sounds in the morning leaving us goin hectic
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01-02-04, 01:33 PM
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******Yo... This was the 2nd best text drop I've seen.... Absolutely perfect flow on this piece, and great word choice...
High level of originality made this piece a nice edition to this forum.... Great job on this piece...... A few detailed multies, and you will get closer to the 10 mark.... Great writing.... 9.0/10
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