. . Cause Ya Kno, We Be Seein Alot Outta Our Eyes. . More Shit Then People Be Knowin. . We Seein It All. . Then We Take The Pen To The Pad N Write About It. . Thas What Pisses Um Off. . Cause Somebody Is Actually Takin Notice N Tryna Let Everybody Else Kno What The Fuck Is Up. . Ya Kno What I'm Sayin. . . .

[FORMULA]
This World Today Has Strayed Away From Great
Is It To Late To Save The Day? Set Things Straight?
At This Rate, It Probly Is, Look At These Kids
Bones Buldging Out They Body, This Some Serious Shit
Tones Indulging In Our Brains Lobby, President Speaking
Residents Peaking, Lookin N Hopin For A Change Of Season
Reason - This World Is Fucked Up, Corrupted, Disarrayed
We Don't Even Have To Disobey For Dis Shit To Stay
We Lookin At - Poverty, Violence, Robbery, Silence
It's Gotten To Me, Gotta Stop It, Kill The Mindless
Who Know No Better Than To Tote A Berreta
And Kill For Cheddar, While Some Is Starvin, We Let Um
This Country Seems To Have The Munchies For Trouble
Pissed Off People, Yeah We Got Sadaam, But Shit Jus Doubled
Hey - Where Fuck Is These Weapons Of Mass Destruction
Government's Bluffin, They Lovin This Nothin, Tell Me Somethin
This Is Like An Obstruction Of Justice - What About The Homeless?
We Spend Money On War But Have Nothin To Atone For This
Why Not Give A Little Money To The Poor, Give Um Some Shelter
Give Um A Lil Wealth N Good Health, Jus So You Can Say You Helpin
Make Tropps Fall Back From Iraq N Pack They Homes With Laughs
Not Sorrow Cause At Last The Past Haunts Um N A Soldier's Passed
The Bleeding Can Stop Now, The Readings Can Pop Now
And Open Up Ears For Heeding Befo' Another Get's Shot Down
I Can't Stand This, I Demand Shit To Shift, Cause This Situation
Is Only Inflatin', No Debatin' -
Make A Change Or Continue To Recieve N See The Hatred

[Chorus]
Step Back. . Get A Full View Of This Situation
Don't Be Fooled By News, Peep This Declaration
No Hesistation, I Hate What This World Has Become, Shit
I Don't Want My Daughter Or Son To Live In This

[MASTA C]
Theres just so many things that are going on in the world today…
So much pain and anguish its just taking your boy or girl away…
Young minds corrupted by war that seems to go on forever…
And your never gonna be able to fix it, you should be more clever…
Cause when the youth see all of this death and destruction…
They then think…that it is ok to make a population reduction…
Their minds in violence's seduction, now we got a problem…
Cause the kid saw a guy and shot'em saying "Yes I got'em!"..
Now that leads to death…which there is already enough of..
Drop the hate cause its not great and just wait just up love..
Cause that's what this world needs, it doesn't need no more death..
Doing your best to bring good but at some point ya know your next..
Cause all of these world situations you just cant avoid no more..
The media brings it right into your own home to just show gore..
Family love grows poor cause its sedated by all of the violence..
Now every home….has just grown….to the moan….of silence…

[Chorus]

[FORMULA]
Prostitutes N Hookers, Streets Flooded With Thong-Lookers
Rape Creates A State Of Fate You Can't Misplace With Boobs N
I've Come To The Conclusion That We Need A Resolution
Cause Our Constitution Ain't Constitutin' What We Doin
Come On Dogs, Gun Control, Grow Some Balls, Be Bold
Play Tha Cards You Dealt N Melt Gangstas Till They Fold
Do Somethin ! Sittin On Ya Ass N Countin Hours Pass
Ain't Solvin Nothin Fast. . This Shit'll Forever Last
Cause You Make No Attempt To Lift Up Spirits N Ya Integrity -
Lacks Clarity, Ya Don't Wanna Hear This Shit -
But Shit My Words Weigh Heavily . . Get -
Up N Fuckin Turn This World Upside Down, I Mean Fuck
Seein As This World Is Stuck Since This Shit Is Right-Side Up
That's The Least You Could Do, Be Ya Own Individual
Politicians Diminish A Witness, Kill Rap?, I'm Not Feelin You
Concentrate On The Problems At Hand Man, Don't Worry Bout Us
We Ain't Tryna Cause A Rush Of Fuss - We Lettin Um Kno What's Up
I Can't Live Like Shit, I Can't Rib** Like This, Man Fuck
Where's The Luck? Between Problems N Bullshit. . Lady Is Stuck
I'm Well Aware And Hella Scared Of What Has Yet To Come
Check In A Month, I'm Bouncin, Fuck This World, I'm Done

[Chorus]

. . . Recognize The World's Situations. . Peep Our Declaration. . Facts We Statin. . Sure As Hell Can't Be Denied Lately. .

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REPLIED TO:
Deva's Nuclear Concepts Drop
Gene Pool- Hybrid Theory
LoCo- Fuck You Snake Eyes

Aiight, Shit Is A Little Long. . Took Masta Like 30 Mins To Key His Verse. . Both Verses Of Mine Were Keyed In Less Than 25 Minutes. . Masta . . You Slow As Fuck Lol. . Jus Playin Man. Hope Ya'll Like This. .

-Formula.

Edit: The Two Asteriks { ** } Next To Ribs. .

I Can't Rib Like This. . That Means I Can't Keep Not Havin Enough Money To Eat And Shit N That You Can See My Ribs From The Lack Of Food. . Jus Wanted To Clear That Up.

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yo again a very Nice Piece By You both I enjoyed it....

Formula-I Like Your Style Ya Structure Is Good....it helps when Ya Flow is ALways Tight Man...Ya Vocab is always Good.....And Ya Word Play Put the Oicture In My Head Man Nice Shit


Masta- man U just suck Compared to Fomula.....Jokes... na Man Ya Did Get To Follow Fomula and ya Made that Verse Tight Im Always Impressed With Ya Structure...ya FLow was Good Like Always..........ya BOth Had Mutis.........

You too Work Well to gether.....P.€.a.c.€.......
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Formula u teared this track u went on absolutly sik i can hardly fault ya.
Masta C i liked ur verse it wernt as good as formula's but then dats probably because he was spittin 4 longer

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I kno u niggaz r second guessin da state i'm in,
Bitch i'm into making hit records dat spin like rims.

Uppin. . What's The Snores For ?

- Formula.

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Sup G's?

That was some tight shit. Great choice of topic...i enjoyed reading it coz im very political myself.

Formula: Your best lines were: -

"At This Rate, It Probly Is, Look At These Kids
Bones Buldging Out They Body, This Some Serious Shit"

- I can see the image...fuckin sick!

"Make Tropps Fall Back From Iraq N Pack They Homes With Laughs
Not Sorrow Cause At Last The Past Haunts Um N A Soldier's Passed"

- Those 2 lines were ill, one expressed happiness and the other expressed sadness.

"That's The Least You Could Do, Be Ya Own Individual
Politicians Diminish A Witness, Kill Rap?, I'm Not Feelin You
Concentrate On The Problems At Hand Man, Don't Worry Bout Us
We Ain't Tryna Cause A Rush Of Fuss - We Lettin Um Kno What's Up"

- I agree with what u sayin. True shit!

"I'm Well Aware And Hella Scared Of What Has Yet To Come
Check In A Month, I'm Bouncin, Fuck This World, I'm Done"

- Great strong finish. Makes me wanna check out ya new 'pain lyrics' next month.

Weakness: -

"Thong-Lookers" - A serious song with serious lyrics only gets spoiled with words like this. You need to improve your flow.

Masta C: Your best lines were: -

"Cause that's what this world needs, it doesn't need no more death..
Doing your best to bring good but at some point ya know your next"

- Imma bring ma kids up good...but they can still get smoked!

"Cause all of these world situations you just cant avoid no more..
The media brings it right into your own home to just show gore..
Family love grows poor cause its sedated by all of the violence..
Now every home….has just grown….to the moan….of silence…" - These were not only your best lines...but the best lines of the whole song.

Weakness: - The verse was more of a poem then a song.

Chorus: - The last line said it all!

Overall: - Very interesting to read and some tight, true words have been spoken about society today. 8/10.

Tash Shyne.

Dayum Cuz, Big Ups For That Reply. . Great To See You Break It Down Like That. . The Thong Lookers Line. . Instead Of On-Lookers I Decided To Put Thong Because We Have Alotta Kids N Shit Lookin For Prostitutes. . That Line Is Basically Talkin Bout Prostitution. . But Good Look On The Reply Cuz. . When You Drop Somethin I'll Def Hit It Up.

- Formula.

Edit - Oh Yeah. . The 'Check In A Month' Line Doesn't Mean To Check For My Pieces Next Month. . It Means I'm Gettin Paid. . Lol, Sorry For That Confusion.

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...Hmm...long as shit...both verses were nice...form's was beteer written..but..Mas had more style...good job fellas...^^

you guys straight compliment each others already established styles.all and all this was a worthy read and a great collab you both go hand and hand in aLL illness.

this collab is all fire.......the wordplay was tight.....the structure,the flow,vocab, evrything was all on fire.........overall........a good ass collab.........keep goin at it son

peace

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reppin well ma dawgs.....interseting topic....and nicely executed.....both complimented eachothrs style......nuthin much more to say other than, LETS COLLAB I AINT DONE ONE IN A WHILE.......pZ