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adored bliss of whored kids tortured by corsets
of advertisers dumb deaf and blind leadin horses to water but i can't make em drink liquid knowledge in the form of a solid iniquitous followers swallow hollow tolerance of hatred i can't take it when they horde all their money for some plastic face lifts watch the space cadets embrace racial epithets ignore evidence of injustice in the present tense instead to assimilate infiltrate my inner space discriminate can't eliminate the timid sinner's fate hedonistic images breathin limitless demon's allegiance to pledges and creeds of sedatives prozac embedded in heads' appeasement eager to max the apathy attackin me with trappins of placid platitudes plastered with plastic anatomies politically correct americans with arrogance to marry economics and equality democracy and foreign policies homilies that solder monstrosities to fill more billboards and sell dreams upheld schemes of a kill force... ![]() |
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yeah i thought this was pretty good,,,seemed qiute fast...extensive use of vocab, i thought it maybe overpowered it a bit...but looking past that...good i thought.....dunno bout the topic though..........pZ.
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yo man dis joint was hot n pretty fast...so its a good flow
evrything was good ..the vocab, mulits, structure, n rhthym or beat... keep elevatin poet...... peace
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nice man thats pretty much what i got to say but i think it could have a betta flow u kno what a meani think if u work on u would be really good but i aint great so ya if i post ne of mine help me out.. peace
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