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Checkin in...... .

Hey I know u wanted to drop firs and all but Im done with my verse and im going 2 bed so here it is...

Bombz Face rapist, its funny how you get screwed every time you 'lay text' (latex)/
Ya careers in tha hole like Boy George during gay sex/
Crashin into porta potties is tha only time you wreck shit/
Small towns in tha south have trouble beleivin how dull ya 'text is'/ (Texas)
You wouldnt blow up if you went threw a nine month pregnancy/
I'll toss ya lower torso into tha Mediterranean, help you leave behind a 'leg at sea'/(legacy)
If someone gave this nigga 1 vote they’d be doing a holy deed
You'll think you slept wit a prostitute wit braces tha way ya head will bleed/
Ya delivery is more boring then Ben Stein sellin eye drops/
Your like cats on broken roller coasters, you never come off tha top/
You must rap in sandles cause every time you 'flip you flop'/
Ya verses are like plays alternative schools, you get no props/
Rapist? I'll scrape ya penis wit a wrasp and make you 'file' for sexual harassment/
So this’ll be a good battle ill email you a verse in a attachment /
Leave ya skull bashed in, givin you a enema wit tha same tube I used to cipher gas wit/
Beat ya face wit a magnet to make you look more 'attractive'/

Let the votes decide

Yo.... peep this....

Please don't be dumb, I rep blue, tha' colors you show they rep' a bumb, in my eyes you the lord of the slums//
I blast cats like you, just like I blast my chick with cum, if my dick can lure my bitch than I can make you come//
Intelligence against my flow has no reason, only reason you livin' is for my pleasin', light weights like you believe my preachin', like when I said you were coo', but dawg, I was teasin'//
He type of cat who got no chedah but still be cheasin, he type slow, I told him to spice of his flow so he asked "what type of seasin?"//
I'll take the whole Equrical Region, nuke em', and watch them sinkin', like when I be wreckin' young heads for the joy of them leakin'//
You see me cease my oppenents and still don't peep what I be releasin', cuz this niggah steals his rhymes from other forums and has the nerve to say Im cheatin?//
But I carry more wheight than this of when I cary back-packs, After he looses, he's gonna be like Ja' Rule chantin' "Ima clap back!"//
Uh Oh! Time to retreat, this coward hides under the sheets, cuz he aint ready for fight night, when he still consist of night lights//
But I pack heat, you hide, this niggah slides from the elite,
how you and your boyz gonna jump on one niggah and you end up getting beat?//


Niggah you aint ready...

Looks to me like young got this, he had a ton more punches, pretty much every line was a punch, and his flow was pretty good. Bombz you had alotta mutli's no real hard punches, a couple personals. But i didn't think you tried hard enuff in this battle, young probly did steal that verse too, but he get's the win here. honest vote=young.

Ahh, gotta go with Wrecka on this one. Some tight punches took this, both flows were pretty good. The wordplay kind of outshined the disses of Bombz's verse i guess. A battle of two different types of punches, i prefer wordplay.

This battles kind of wack but it seems like it's never going to end. Vote man if you have time. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98477

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Aiight.......

Da Breakdown

Opener-Yung
Punch's-Yung
Flow-Tie
Structure-Yung
Vocab-Tie
Wordplay-Tie
Closer-Yung
Overall-Yung

Vote-Yung

He had harder hittin punch's n personals!.......over good battle da both of you's!

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Uppin for some more votes...Thats 2-1................................................. .................................................. .

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opener yung
closer bombs
punches yung
personals bombs
wordplay yung
overal yung

hey young i thought you were gonna leave this site and not come back?????????????????????????????????????

I was but I decided not too... Anyways uppin for a few more votes to finish this thing off .................................................. ....

Vote- Young... Why? well...

He had a better overall verse..

Close battle but

Yung had harder hitting punches that actually connected and his wordplay withstood all BombZ attacks. Although BombZ you have potential and could have won this if u would have come a bit harder.

Vote- YHW

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1 more vote and this is over with....Comeon jeez.............................................. ....................................